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With My Dad's 22

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
8:22
Photo by Stephen Harlan on Unsplash

Bell rings, time for class

Shots ring out - there's breaking glass

And the angels, cry

sad poetry

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Antoinette L Brey3 years ago

    Both sad and powerful

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Emotional!!! Hugs & a💖

  • That's kind of sad poetry but nicely written

  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    Wow 😭. This was heavy and still beautiful.

  • Julia Schulz3 years ago

    powerful

  • A heartbreaking truth.

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Omg. I agree with Heather below. You did such a great job managing to make this beautiful despite the reality. Wonderful work!

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    My heart breaks for the truth in this. You wrote that so beautifully despite the tragedy of it all. Excellent piece.

  • Such a sad truth!❤️

  • Moe Radosevich3 years ago

    🥲 that’s a sad situation Kelli, hard to digest,

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Oh my. That's powerful.

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