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28-01-80

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By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
28-01-80
Photo by Waldemar on Unsplash

For Poppy's prompt "Write a poem about a specific day and make the title a date," in the FB group Vocal * Voices in Minor.

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No storm of any note drenched the world beneath my mother's feet

No fire of any acclaim burned the world around my first home

no sign from heaven, no sign of the day's importance

no sounding call of angels heralding the arrival

Silence...just silence...and normalcy

the silence was punctured...the normalcy transformed

screams of adult, labouring hard, the forthcoming imminent

screams of child, yearning for light, air and warmth

a Paul was born.

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Paul Stewart

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock2 years ago

    And a Paul-line in the sand was drawn. (Sorry. Again that was the best I could do.)

  • Maria Cafolla2 years ago

    It was a night of hard labour right enough..started during the late night news, and ended just before the midwife's nightshift ended. Much joy wonder and happiness was felt in that moment. Paul you came into our world and lives,not with a wimper,but a gutsy cry "I am here!". And to quote Cathy not "just any Paul", Its a wonder my heart didn't burst with love, when I held you in my arms!! No storm drenched my feet, but there was a storm brewing for sure when the late news started ❤️

  • Help I thought your title meant 2080 and then I reached the last line and realised it was 1980. Like I thought this was about some kinda dystopian future 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Sorry Sir Paul, I don't know what's wrong with me hahahahhahahaha

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    Welcome to the world. Paul! Lol, I loved this poem! 😍

  • John Cox2 years ago

    This is a wonderful poem, Paul. I, for one, feel fortunate that you entered the world, even if - as you say - unheralded. It is both a pleasure and a privilege to read your art. Even better, I love our written interactions on this platform ironically know as Vocal. 😊

  • Jess Boyes2 years ago

    THE Paul was born. Hooray!

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Not just any Paul! The Paul Stewart! What a day to remember!

  • Mackenzie Davis2 years ago

    It feels like the speaker is grappling with the truth of the ordinary that preceded his birth. I love seeing that tension meet the gravity/importance of the final line. Beautiful.

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    "A Paul was born." And not just any Paul, but this Paul. Well done, Paul. 😁

  • JBaz2 years ago

    What a great day ....yay

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    The normality and import of each of us, this is fantastic.

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    'A Paul was born.' Loved this so much! And yay for that very important date :)

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