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11/5/19

A poem I never finished that became it’s own.

By Sarah WilcoxPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

Here I am

Eyes closed; dancing in the rain

Every drop

Cools the fire; numbs the pain

Find me under the moon

Drag me out of the river

Even under the suns heat

My soul begins to shiver

Made from ashes

Howling in the night

Knows the darkness

But revels in the light

sad poetry

About the Creator

Sarah Wilcox

Momma 🐺 of two feral girls!

Poet.

Artist.

Wildfire.

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Outstanding

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

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  • MrZabi2 years ago

    Amazing story keep uploading

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    This is beautiful, definitely deserves more eyes on it imo x

  • Jennifer David2 years ago

    Beautifully written <3

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