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Beneath the Silent Star

The story of boy mother and stars

By Sofia Richie Published 7 months ago 3 min read

High in the northern hills, where the winds whispered secrets and snowflakes danced like lost souls, lay a village forgotten by time. It was a place where silence ruled and stars glowed brighter than anywhere else on Earth. Among the villagers, none paid much mind to the night sky—except for a boy named Elian.

Elian was quiet, strange, and curious beyond his years. While others worked in fields or warmed their hands near the hearth, he spent nights lying alone on the cold ground, gazing at one particular star. It didn’t twinkle or fade like the others. It was pale blue and eerily still, like it was listening.

The villagers called it The Silent Star.

“Don’t stare at it too long,” warned Old Mira, the village elder. “It listens. And when it hears your heart’s truest wish, it may answer—but never as you expect.”
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Elian never heeded her. His mother had vanished beneath that very star years ago, during the coldest winter the village had known. She had been gathering firewood when she disappeared, her footsteps ending abruptly in snow—no trace, no cry, just silence.

Some said she’d frozen. Others whispered she had followed a song only she could hear.

Elian believed the star had taken her.

One winter night, colder than most, Elian crept to the edge of the woods. The snow glowed faintly in the starlight. He whispered toward the sky, “If you took her, give her back. Or take me instead.”

The star pulsed.

Then the world went still.

The wind stopped. The trees froze mid-sway. Even the snowflakes hung in the air, suspended. And then, with a breath of silence that echoed louder than thunder, a figure appeared.
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She wore robes of night and stars in her hair. Her voice was not sound, but thought—direct and clear.

“Why do you call me?” she asked, though her lips never moved.

Elian trembled. “I want my mother.”

The figure stepped closer. Her eyes held constellations.

“She came to me willingly,” said the being. “She heard the stars. Few do.”

“Then why not me?” he cried. “I’ve listened every night!”

“You listen to remember. She listened to know.”

Elian’s heart sank. “So I can’t see her again?”

The figure’s eyes softened. “There is a price for crossing the boundary between time and silence. Are you willing to forget who you are, Elian? To become like her—no longer of earth, no longer of memory?”

He paused, heart torn between longing and fear.

“I… I don’t know,” he whispered.

She looked skyward. “Then the time is not yet.”

With a motion like wind brushing water, she raised her hand, and the air shimmered. “But I will grant you one truth.”

The sky opened—not with light, but vision.

Elian saw his mother, not in pain, not lost, but ageless, walking among stars, whispering wisdom to comets, and cradling light like a song. She smiled at him—not with sorrow, but peace.

And then it was gone.

The star dimmed, just a little, as if exhaling.

Elian found himself on the snow again, alone—but changed.

When he returned to the village, his eyes glowed with quiet understanding. He no longer questioned the silence, nor feared the star. He no longer begged it to return the past.

Instead, he taught the village children how to listen—not just to the wind, but to the silence between sounds. How sometimes, the stars say the most when they say nothing at all.

And every night, beneath the silent star, Elian would smile—not in hope, nor in grief, but in knowing.

Because now, he finally understood.



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About the Creator

Sofia Richie


Sofia is a storyteller who weaves emotion into every word. With a deep love for connection, language, and cultural depth, his stories illuminate unseen beauty and inspire reflection across borders—both real and imagine.

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