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A Story About Finishing What You Start

When giving up seems easier, sometimes finishing is the victory that changes everything.

By Asghar ali awanPublished 2 months ago 3 min read
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The crowd had already started to leave the stadium when Noah reached the final lap.

He could hear the faint sound of clapping not the roaring applause that greeted the first-place runner, but a scattered rhythm of encouragement for the last man still running.

His legs burned. His breath came in sharp, uneven bursts. His chest felt like it might cave in. But Noah didn’t stop.

This was his first marathon something he’d dreamed of since high school. He wasn’t here to win medals. He was here to prove to himself that he could finish something.

Months ago, when he first announced he would run a marathon, everyone had laughed.

“You? You can’t even run a mile without gasping.”

They weren’t wrong. Noah had never been athletic. He worked a desk job, ate takeout most nights, and rarely saw the sunrise. But something inside him had shifted one morning when he caught his reflection in a subway window tired, unmotivated, and stuck in a loop of comfort.

He’d thought, If I can’t run from who I am, maybe I can run toward who I want to be.

So, he started. One block. Then two. He ran through pain, through rain, through doubts. Some days, he only managed ten minutes before collapsing on the curb. But every morning, he laced up his shoes again.

Training wasn’t easy. There were injuries, skipped workouts, and self-doubt whispering, You’re wasting your time. But Noah pushed through, fueled by one simple goal: to finish the race.

And now, here he was mile 25, every muscle screaming.

Runners had long crossed the finish line. Volunteers were packing up water bottles and banners. The sun had dipped low, casting a golden haze across the track.

He could stop. No one would blame him. No one was watching.

But then, from the stands, a voice rang out.

“Keep going, Noah!”

It was his younger sister, Emily, standing alone, waving frantically. She’d been there since the starting gun, waiting cheering even as the crowd thinned.

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Her voice cut through the noise in his head.

Noah straightened his back. One more step. Then another.

When he finally turned the last corner, something incredible happened. The small group of remaining spectators started clapping again. One volunteer picked up a bell and rang it. Others began to chant, “You got this! You got this!”

Tears blurred his vision. His heart was pounding, but not from exhaustion from pride.

As he crossed the finish line, there was no confetti, no cameras, no loudspeakers. Just the soft sound of sneakers on pavement and the echo of his own breathing.

But in that quiet, Noah smiled wider than any champion that day.

He had finished.

Emily ran up and hugged him, tears in her eyes.

“You did it!” she whispered.

Noah laughed, breathless.

“I didn’t win.”

“You did,” she said. “You just don’t see it yet.”

That night, when Noah finally got home, he placed the small finisher’s medal on his desk. It wasn’t shiny or glamorous, but it meant more than any trophy ever could. It was proof that progress wasn’t about perfection it was about persistence.

Weeks later, Noah signed up for another race a half-marathon this time. He wasn’t trying to be the fastest. He was just chasing the version of himself who refused to give up.

Every time he laced up his shoes, he remembered that moment the empty track, the fading light, the few people still cheering. And he realized something powerful:

You don’t run to prove others wrong.

You don’t run to prove others wrong.

You run to prove to yourself that you’re still moving forward.

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About the Creator

Asghar ali awan

I'm Asghar ali awan

"Senior storyteller passionate about crafting timeless tales with powerful morals. Every story I create carries a deep lesson, inspiring readers to reflect and grow ,I strive to leave a lasting impact through words".

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