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The Silence Between Raindrops

Sometimes, healing doesn't come from answers—it grows in the quiet moments we try to escape.

By SAHIB AFRIDIPublished 6 months ago 3 min read

The rain tapped softly on the windowpane.

Outside, the sky hung low, heavy with unshed tears.

Inside, Mira sat still, a warm cup of tea in her trembling hands.

She hadn't spoken all morning.

It had been three weeks since Daniel left.

No note.

No explanation.

Just a gap where his voice used to be.

She tried to retrace every word they'd spoken.

Every moment that might have cracked the surface.

But love doesn’t always crumble with sound.

Sometimes, it dissolves in silence.

The apartment was too quiet now.

Too clean.

His books were gone.

So was his toothbrush.

Mira hated that she noticed that detail.

The toothbrush.

So small, so stupid.

So final.

She told no one.

She didn’t want to hear them say, “You deserve better.”

Or worse: “Maybe he’ll come back.”

Closure wasn’t a gift they could give her.

Instead, she went to work.

She smiled when necessary.

She answered emails.

But her soul sat in the shadows.

She walked slower now.

Avoided familiar songs.

Dreaded nighttime silence.

Cried in places no one could hear.

One rainy evening, she wandered into a bookstore.

She didn’t mean to.

It just happened.

Like most of life lately.

The smell of paper comforted her.

She ran her fingers along the spines of novels.

Each one a world she could escape into.

Each one quieter than her thoughts.

She picked up a poetry book.

Opened it randomly.

A single line stared back: “What breaks you, builds you differently.”

She closed her eyes.

Something in her softened.

Not healed.

Not yet.

But something loosened its grip.

She bought the book.

Took it home.

Read it slowly under dim light.

Each word was a whisper she hadn’t realized she needed.

She cried.

Not out of grief.

But release.

A quiet, cleansing ache.

The days remained gray.

Still no word from Daniel.

Still no explanation.

But she stopped waiting.

She began writing.

Not to forget, but to remember differently.

Her pain had a voice now.

And she listened.

She wrote of rain, silence, and strength.

Of wounds that didn’t bleed.

Of questions left unanswered.

Of surviving anyway.

One morning, she opened her window.

Let the breeze fill the room.

Let the day come as it was.

No expectations.

She began walking after work.

Through the park.

Past the benches.

Past the couples.

She didn’t envy them anymore.

She didn’t wish for the past.

She felt the ground beneath her.

She was still here.

On her way home one night, it started raining.

She didn’t run.

Didn’t hide.

She tilted her head back.

The drops kissed her face.

They didn’t sting anymore.

They simply… were.

And she let them be.

Mira stood in the rain.

A little older.

A little wiser.

A little more her.

Healing had come.

Not loud.

Not fast.

But real.

She never heard from Daniel again.

No call.

No message.

Just an echo of a name she no longer whispered.

And that was enough.

She didn’t need him to explain.

She didn’t need closure wrapped in apologies.

She had found peace in the quiet.

The kind that grows between raindrops.

The kind that lingers in solitude.

The kind that builds you, softly.

When no one’s watching.

Mira’s journey through heartbreak revealed that healing isn’t found in answers or apologies—it lives in acceptance, silence, and self-discovery. Though Daniel’s absence left a void, she filled it not with bitterness, but with growth. Through poetry, solitude, and rainy walks, she rebuilt herself piece by piece. In the stillness she once feared, Mira found strength, peace, and a deeper connection to herself. The story reminds us that closure often comes from within, and sometimes, the rain helps us begin again.

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SAHIB AFRIDI

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  • Umar Faiz6 months ago

    Mannnn this is beautifully written !!!!!

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