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The Last Promise

When the battlefield took everything… only a promise survived.

By Wings of Time Published about a month ago 3 min read

A World War Story of Two Friends

The winter of 1944 was colder than any soldier had ever known. Snow mixed with ashes, and every breath carried the taste of fear. Deep in the muddy trenches of France sat two young soldiers — Arvin Hale, just 19, and Jonas Reed, 20. They had left their homes with dreams, pride, and the belief that the war would end quickly. But the battlefield taught them otherwise.

Arvin sat hunched over, holding a small piece of paper against his knee, using the dim morning light to write. His hands trembled not from cold, but from thoughts he could no longer silence. Jonas watched him quietly.

“Writing again?” Jonas asked with a weak smile.

Arvin nodded without looking up. “For my mother. She worries too much.”

Jonas sighed. “All mothers do.”

Arvin finally folded the letter carefully, pressing it flat as if it were the most valuable thing he owned. “If anything happens to me… make sure this reaches her,” he whispered.

Jonas frowned. “Don’t talk like that. You’ll go home. We both will.”

But both of them knew that each sunrise could be their last.

The sound of distant artillery shook the ground. Commanders shouted orders. The attack would begin any moment. Jonas tightened the straps of his helmet, his breathing fast. Arvin placed the letter safely inside his chest pocket.

“Jonas,” Arvin said softly. “If we die today… I want you to know something.”

Jonas turned toward him.

“You’ve been like a brother to me,” Arvin continued. “War gave me many scars, but it also gave me you.”

Jonas smiled, though his eyes were watery. “Then let’s survive this together.”

But war rarely listens to prayers.

As the sun rose, the battlefield erupted. Explosions shook the earth, smoke blinded the sky, and bullets tore through the air like angry insects. Arvin and Jonas ran forward with their unit, hearts pounding, mud splashing beneath their boots.

Halfway across the ruined field, Jonas suddenly gasped. A bullet struck his chest, knocking him to the ground.

“Jonas!” Arvin dropped beside him, trying to pull him behind a piece of broken wall.

Jonas coughed, blood staining his lips. His face was pale, eyes struggling to stay open.

“Arvin…” he whispered, his voice barely a breath. “Take it…”

He placed a small metal badge in Arvin’s shaking hand.

“My mother’s only memory of me… give it to her. Promise me.”

Arvin felt his throat burn. Tears spilled down his dirty cheeks, but he nodded firmly. “I promise, Jonas. I swear it.”

Jonas tried to smile—just once more. And then his hand went still.

Arvin wanted to scream, but the battlefield didn’t allow grief. With shaking arms, he lifted Jonas’s badge and placed it close to his heart alongside his own letter. “I’ll take you home,” he whispered.

He forced himself up and continued crawling through smoke and debris, dragging his wounded leg, refusing to stop. Every step was agony. Every breath felt stolen. But he held on, driven only by the promise he had made.

Hours later, when the battle ended, a rescue team found Arvin near the remains of a burnt truck. He had collapsed on his side, body still, eyes closed. But his hands…

His hands were gripping two things tightly:

His letter.

And Jonas’s badge.

Even in death, he wouldn’t let the promise go.

The officers collected the items with care. Weeks later, two mothers — miles apart — received the final pieces of their sons. Arvin’s letter arrived with tear stains, Jonas’s badge carried the last warmth of friendship.

Both mothers cried silently, whispering prayers for boys who had dreamed of returning home but instead returned as heroes.

The world forgot many names of the war.

But the story of two young friends, bound by loyalty until their last breath…

Still lives in the hearts of those who believe that true friendship never dies — not even in the fire of war.

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Wings of Time

I'm Wings of Time—a storyteller from Swat, Pakistan. I write immersive, researched tales of war, aviation, and history that bring the past roaring back to life

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