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Ten Years. One Promise. A Love Worth Waiting For.

When Destiny Keeps Perfect Time

By Md. Rifat HossainPublished 8 months ago 4 min read

Ten Years. One Promise. A Love Worth Waiting For.

The autumn gust sent red leaves swirling through Millbrook Station as Claire Hastings stepped down from the evening train, clutching a well-worn sketchbook to her chest. She stood undecided beneath the ancient iron clock—7:02 p.m., the same moment that she left ten years ago—and drew the cold air over the quiver of hope in her body.

Ten years.

One promise.

A love worth waiting for.

The Night Everything Began

Claire was twenty-one when she met Lucas Reyes in the back of the ticket booth at the annual Harvest Lantern Festival. She, an ethereal fine arts student, there to visit her grandmother; he, a grease-knuckled local mechanic with a crooked, easy smile. They spent that fall evening lighting candles in lanterns on the river, discussing how engines worked and why sunsets were purple. They leaned on the footbridge at sunrise, observing gentle mist roll across the water.

Sometime, Lucas whispered, I'll construct a motorcycle, ride cross-country, and track you down wherever your galleries are being exhibited.

And I'll paint each dawn along the route, Claire replied.

But life required decisions quicker than love could take hold. Claire's scholarship in Paris arrived; Lucas's father got sick, keeping him at the family garage. They caught each other at Millbrook Station the day she departed, both with more love than bags and no room to fold regret.

Lucas handed her a small brass gear in her hand—his first custom creation.

Give me ten years, he said to her. If we both still feel this way about it, meet me here. October 18th. 7 p.m. One promise.

Claire curled her fingers over the gear. I'll be here, she breathed. The train whistle stole whatever words there may have been after.

A Decade of Distance

Paris was exhibitions, apprenticeships, and critics dissecting her mechanical romanticism—sunrises framed by cogs and copper. She was sending postcards to Millbrook for two years without Lucas ever writing back. When Grammy passed away, Claire returned for the funeral, found out Lucas's dad passed away the same week, and the garage had nearly folded up shop. She left sympathy flowers, but nobody came to the door to pick them up.

However, every painting that she made had a brass gear hidden somewhere in the brushstrokes.

Lucas, by contrast, converted the garage to Reyes Restorations, where the business was restoring vintage bikes. He scoured motorbike rallies from Maine to Mexico, tracking down rare finds and the adrenaline rush Claire had loved. Photographers caught him on magazine covers, windswept locks beside resurrected motors—never wearing anything different: a simple necklace with a vacant ring where a gear used to live.

Friends told him to get on with his life. He declined politely, every time.

The Return

And now, thirty-one, Claire left the Paris studio skylight for the commuter train's short ceiling, brass cog on a chain against her collarbone. She didn't say anything. Hope was fragile; expectations were suffocating. But a promise—spoken once in early morning silence—was still more weighty.

The stop was more restrained than memory: the hushed hum of vending machines and the sound of Claire's boots clicking on tile. She walked across the footbridge over the tracks, her heart racing in double beats—hope and fear.

7:05 p.m.

An engine coughed far away, growing louder as twin lights etched a path through twilight. A vintage café racer motorcycle pulled onto the platform access road. Its rider dismounted and removed a helmet, revealing windswept dark hair and eyes still looking like morning after rain.

Lucas.

He spotted her at once—sketchbook, red hair, the horror unfolding on her face. For a moment neither of them moved, as if to act would break the spell.

Then they were embracing each other, the sound of fading train swallowing the wordless wave of coming together.

Catching Up in Half Sentences

They found a worn bench by the lantern river, which was now dark and still under the stars.

I tried to write, Lucas explained, voice rough. All the letters seemed too light, or too heavy.

I nearly came back, Claire confessed. But I thought you might need to stay, and I might have to go.

They reminisced about missing fathers and job vacancies in the gallery, wakeless nights revving motors or mixing dyes, and the quiet bruise of time measured in maybes.

Lucas pulled out the empty necklace ring from his shirt. I was waiting to give this back.

Claire popped the brass gear off her chain. Fingers shook as she snapped gear into ring—two halves reunited like puzzle pieces.

There, he exhaled. Finally fits.

Taking the Same Path

But now what? Claire asked, the practical question neither teenager had considered.

I rebuilt a 1937 Indian Scout with two saddlebags and room for sketching, Lucas said. I charted a ride after sunrise across the country. Ten weeks. I leave tomorrow morning—unless…

Unless the painter receives a last minute offer? Claire finished, eyes aglow.

He grinned. Payment in sunrises and open road.

Claire closed her sketchbook, tucked her hand into his grease-stained palm. "I've waited ten years for this story."

Dawn, Once More

They stuffed the charcoal, paint, and additional spark plugs into canvas rolls under cover of darkness. At 6:48 a.m., the engine of the motorcycle rumbled to life on the station road, pink light unfurling over hills. Claire climbed aboard behind Lucas, arms around his waist, sketchbook pressed against her spine.

As they rode off into the distance, Theo's old station clock chimed seven. A pair of last year's leftover carnival festoon lanterns hung loose from a post and drifted into the air—carrying, maybe, the last tatters of reality they'd ever left behind.

Ten years.

One promise.

And the kind of love that finds you right where you said you'd be—finally ready to ride out every dawn horizon with each other.

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