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Whispering Walls

Unraveling the Secrets of a Forgotten Past in the Haunted Attic

By Dinesh MauryaPublished about a year ago 4 min read
The attic walls whispered her name, their shadows stretching closer as the moonlight dimmed. Beyond the window, the forest waited, silent and watchful."

Whispering Walls: A Haunting Beyond the Attic

The new house of Sophie's family was a tall, weather-beaten house that loomed on the outskirts of town. To her parents, it was a fresh start, but for Sophie herself, it truly was a leap of faith. The house was far from her old school, her friends, and all the familiar sights. Yet what unsettled her was her new room-the attic.

The attic was not cozy like the bedroom she was used to. It had a low, slanting roof, wood beams, and peeling wallpaper with faded floral patterns that made it look scanty. A small, round window saw out onto a heavy forest which would have seemed to extend forever. Sophie told herself that it was not bad. She even tried loving the attic. But on her first night in it, lying staring at the patterns on the wall, she heard it: the softest whisper.

First, Sophie thought it was the wind slipping through the cracks in the old wooden frame. But louder it grew, unmistakable: it wasn't random, and it was a voice.

 "Help… find me…"

Sophie sat up in bed, her heart racing. "Who's there?" she whispered, but the room fell silent.

 The Whispers Continue

The whispers didn’t stop after that night. Every evening, as Sophie climbed into bed, they began. Sometimes they were faint, like a distant echo. Other times, they were louder, urgent. Words like “forest”, “lost”, and “trapped” repeated again and again.

Sophie tried telling her parents. Her mom laughed nervously. “It’s an old house, Sophie. Old houses make noises.” Her dad added, “You’ll get used to it. You’re just imagining things.”

But Sophie wasn't imagining anything.

As days turned into weeks, she started to notice a pattern. The whispers always seemed to emanate from the same part of the attic wall, right behind her bed. One evening, when it was louder than usual, she pressed her ear against the cold surface.

"Please… help…"

Her stomach twisted. Whatever whomever-was whispering wanted her to hear it.

A Clue in the Walls

Eager for more information, Sophie took to the attic, investigating every nook. She knocked on the walls, listening for a space behind them. Behind one slivered piece of wood that was loose lay an old leather-bound diary. In faded ink across the cover was written "Eleanor".

As the curiosity slowly gave way to unease, Sophie delicately flipped through the brittle pages. Decades earlier, Eleanor had lived in the house when it was a boarding school. The diary chronicled Eleanor's lonely struggle, her fascination with the nearby forest, and a mysterious illness that confined her to the attic.

On the last entry, Sophie froze:

"I hear them in the walls. They say they're trapped, but I don't know how to help. I'm scared to go into the forest."

Eleanor had heard the whispers too.

Facing the Forest

That night the whispers were louder than ever, almost pleading for Sophie to take some action. "Forest… come… help…" they chanted.

Grabbing her flashlight, Sophie slipped out of bed and tiptoed downstairs. The house was silent; her parents were fast asleep. Stepping outside, the cool night air made her shiver.

The forest loomed ahead, dark and still. Sophie hesitated. The whispers had always frightened her, but now they felt like a guide, urging her forward.

As she walked further into the woods, the trees seemed to crowd in closer around her. The whispers grew louder and louder, deeper and deeper into the forest until she came upon a clearing; in the center of it sat an old, crumbling well, moss-clad stones and all. The whispers stopped.

A Haunting Discovery

Cautious, Sophie approached the well. The flashlight shook in her trembling hand. When she looked inside, she saw nothing but darkness. But she felt something-strong feelings of sorrow and longing.

"Who's there?" she called out in a voice barely above a whisper.

The air grew colder, and Sophie seemed to see a figure take form: a girl about her age, with long tangled hair and hollow eyes. She was clad in some tattered dress and stared at Sophie with eyes that shone with hope and despair.

"Eleanor?" Sophie asked, her voice trembling.

The girl did not utter a word. The whispers returned, louder and clearer than before: "Set us free…

Sophie's heart raced. She thought of Eleanor's diary, the entry about the voices in the walls. This wasn't just about Eleanor. There were others.

Setting Them Free

Sophie looked around the clearing and spotted an old, rusty shovel lying half-hidden in the undergrowth. She picked it up and started digging at the bottom of the well. The earth was resistant and had set hard, but she didn't stop. As she dug, the whispering became frantic, almost a chant.

Finally, her spade hit something solid wooden box, buried deep in the soil. Sophie pried it open and found inside it a collection of trifles: a locket, a ribbon, and a small, faded photograph showing a group of children.

The whispers stopped.

A gentle breeze swept the clearing, carrying peace upon her. When she glanced up again, the figure was gone. The forest seemed lighter, almost alive.

A New Start

The next morning Sophie woke up with a lighter heart, as though whatever weighed down on her chest had been removed. Her attic was no longer that oppressing room; it was just a room.

She sat for hours, pouring over the diary and the trinkets, trying to put together the story of the children who lived in the house. They had been forgotten, their voices caught up in the walls, until finally when Sophie was there, they were set free.

Sophie no longer heard the whispers, but often her mind would be filled with the girl in the forest and the secrets inside the house. She did not have all the answers, but one thing was for sure: she had brought peace to those restless spirits.

And by doing so, a sense of belonging had been found within the strange old house that once felt so uninviting.

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About the Creator

Dinesh Maurya

I'm a passionate writer, creative storyteller, and motivational enthusiast who has carved out engaging narratives to inspire and educate. I can offer linguistic expertise combined with richness in culture in my work.

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  • Ravita Mauryaabout a year ago

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