The House That Whispers
Some houses don’t want to be left alone… and some whispers are meant to be heard.

Elena had always been drawn to forgotten places, the kind of houses where the air felt heavier, where silence had settled into the walls like a long-lost resident. So when she inherited her estranged aunt’s estate in Ravenshade Hollow, she saw it as an adventure—a chance to explore a mystery wrapped in dust and shadows.
The house stood at the end of a desolate road, shrouded in ivy and memory. Its windows, clouded with age, reflected nothing but darkness. The townspeople whispered about it, claiming it was cursed, that her aunt had lived in solitude for a reason. But Elena didn’t believe in curses.
At least, not yet.
The First Night
The first night in the house was uneventful—until it wasn’t. At precisely 3:13 AM, she woke up to the sound of whispers. Soft. Insistent. They slithered through the cracks of the wooden floor, threading through the old furniture, curling around her ears.
She held her breath.
Maybe it was the wind.
Maybe it was the house settling.
But as she strained to listen, she realized something chilling—
The whispers were saying her name.
A Presence Unseen
By morning, the whispers had faded, leaving only an eerie stillness behind. But something had shifted. The air felt denser, charged with an energy that hadn’t been there before.
She spent the day sorting through her aunt’s belongings, finding old letters with no recipient, photographs of people she didn’t recognize. But one thing stood out—a small wooden box, tucked away in a locked drawer. The key was still in the lock, as if waiting for her.
Inside, she found a stack of brittle, yellowed papers, scrawled with frantic handwriting:
They watch me from the corners.
The house is never quiet.
If you hear the whispers, never answer.
A chill crawled up Elena’s spine. She slammed the box shut, her hands trembling.
That night, the whispers returned.
But this time, they weren’t just calling her name.
They were laughing.
The Shadows That Moved
Days passed in a blur of unease. The whispers grew bolder, filling the halls, seeping into the walls. Shadows moved where no light flickered. The air carried a scent of decay, of something rotting beneath the surface of the house itself.
Elena tried to rationalize it—maybe it was all in her head. But deep down, she knew better. Something was watching her.
She began seeing glimpses—out of the corner of her eye, a figure in the mirror, vanishing before she could turn. A presence lingering behind her, breathing against her neck, though when she spun around, nothing was there.
She stopped sleeping. Stopped eating. The house was draining her, piece by piece.
And then, on the seventh night, she made a mistake.
She answered the whispers.
The House Awakens
"What do you want?" she whispered back, her voice barely audible over the rhythmic creaking of the wooden beams.
For the first time, the house fell silent.
Then, a slow, deliberate knock echoed from the attic.
Knock. Knock. Knock.
Elena’s heart pounded. She clutched a candle and climbed the narrow staircase, every step protesting beneath her weight. The attic door stood slightly ajar, a sliver of darkness spilling into the dim hallway.
She pushed it open.
Inside, dust danced in the flickering candlelight, swirling around the lone rocking chair in the center of the room. And in that chair sat a figure—
Or what used to be one.
It was skeletal, draped in decayed fabric, its hollow eye sockets locked onto hers. And as the whispers rose into a deafening chorus, it smiled.
Elena stumbled back, her scream strangled in her throat. The thing in the chair slowly lifted one bony hand and pointed…
To the mirror.
She turned. Her own reflection stood there, frozen. But it wasn’t mirroring her movements. Instead, it was grinning.
Then, the candle blew out.
The Price of Answering
Elena woke up on the floor of the attic, her breath coming in short, ragged gasps. Morning light streamed through the cracks in the roof. For a moment, she thought she had dreamt it all.
Until she saw the writing on the wall, scratched in jagged letters:
You heard us. Now you are ours.
Elena fled that day, leaving everything behind. She never spoke of the house again, never returned to Ravenshade Hollow. But at night, when the world is quiet, she still hears them.
The whispers.
And she knows that one day, they will come for her.
About the Creator
Dinesh Maurya
I'm a passionate writer, creative storyteller, and motivational enthusiast who has carved out engaging narratives to inspire and educate. I can offer linguistic expertise combined with richness in culture in my work.



Comments (1)
I love your whispering house! Such a great story! Great work!