
The midnight train from Ashwood Station was always quiet, but that night, it was eerily silent. Ravi had missed the earlier train and decided to wait for the last one departing at 11:59 p.m. The platform was nearly empty, lit by flickering lamps that cast long shadows over the tracks. A few other late travelers shuffled along the benches, but most had already gone. The train’s arrival was announced with a soft whistle, and the carriages glided to a stop as if floating rather than rolling.
Ravi stepped aboard. The interior smelled of aged wood and faint smoke. The seats were upholstered in dark red velvet, worn but intact. Oddly, there was no conductor in sight. No one asked for tickets. A few passengers were scattered throughout the car, all dressed in outdated clothing that seemed decades old. Some stared silently out the windows, others appeared lost in thought. None acknowledged Ravi.
He chose a seat near the middle of the carriage and watched the train depart. The city lights receded quickly, replaced by darkness punctuated only by the occasional distant tree or hill. Ravi pulled out his phone to check the time—it read 12:01 a.m. He noticed something strange: the signal was gone, entirely, though he was used to the train being aboveground. Shrugging it off, he tried to relax, but unease settled in his chest.
As the train sped through the night, he began to notice details that didn’t make sense. The scenery outside never changed. Trees repeated in the same pattern, hills appeared identical no matter how far the train traveled. The passengers remained silent, unchanging. He tapped the shoulder of the man across from him. The man’s eyes snapped open, unblinking, and he smiled—a slow, deliberate smile that didn’t reach his eyes. Ravi recoiled, retreating into his seat.
Hours seemed to pass, though his phone showed only ten minutes had elapsed. The train stopped at stations, but no one boarded or departed. Signs displayed names of towns Ravi had never heard of, written in letters that seemed slightly warped. His anxiety grew, and he approached the doors to exit. They wouldn’t open. He tried every handle, but they remained locked. Panic surged as the whispers began. Faint voices drifted through the carriage, indistinct but unmistakable. “Stay… stay… don’t leave…”
Ravi ran back to his seat, heart pounding. He glanced at the other passengers. Some had turned to watch him, their faces pale, eyes hollow, and mouths twitching unnaturally as though trying to form words he could not hear. The train’s interior began to shift subtly—the walls stretching, the floorboards groaning, lights flickering as if struggling to illuminate the reality inside.
Desperate, Ravi noticed a window and tried to open it. The glass didn’t budge. Beyond it, the landscape had changed. The sky was no longer black but a murky gray-green, and the trees looked twisted, almost human in shape, swaying despite the absence of wind. Shadows moved across the ground, creeping toward the train with slow, deliberate steps.
The whispers grew louder, more insistent, surrounding him in all directions. He stumbled backward, falling onto the seat. When he looked up, the train doors opened by themselves. A cold wind swept through the carriage. Ravi hesitated, then jumped into the unknown darkness beyond.
He landed on solid ground, but it wasn’t anywhere he recognized. The station was gone, replaced by a mist-covered platform stretching endlessly into shadows. The train had vanished. Behind him, the sound of distant, metallic whispers drifted through the fog. He ran, calling out, but no answer came. Only the wind, carrying faint echoes of laughter—or perhaps voices of those who had never left the train.
Ravi wandered for hours, days, or maybe weeks—time seemed irrelevant. Eventually, he found a road, but every path led back to the fog-covered platform. No one else was there. It became clear: he had boarded a journey with no end, trapped in a liminal space between worlds.
Legends say that if you hear the whistle of the midnight train from Ashwood Station, some passengers may never return. And for Ravi, that became a reality. Some journeys, he realized, are not meant to end. Some doors open only to disappear behind you.
About the Creator
Sudais Zakwan
Sudais Zakwan – Storyteller of Emotions
Sudais Zakwan is a passionate story writer known for crafting emotionally rich and thought-provoking stories that resonate with readers of all ages. With a unique voice and creative flair.



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