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The Unseen Scales

One act of fear… and a lifetime of unseen consequences.

By Noman AfridiPublished 8 months ago 4 min read
Not everything you see is what it seems — a deadly mistake reveals a hidden realm.

The sun beat down relentlessly on the dusty track, shimmering waves rising from the scorched earth. I was on my way back from a remote village, where I’d been working on a community development project. The path was long and winding, flanked by sparse, thorny bushes and jagged rocks. Fatigue was setting in, and I longed for the cool shade of my home.

Suddenly, a flicker of movement caught my eye. Right in the middle of the path, basking lazily in the scorching heat, lay a snake. It was a large one, thick as my arm, with scales that glistened a dull, venomous black. Its head, triangular and menacing, was slightly raised, its forked tongue flicking out in a slow, hypnotic rhythm.

My heart immediately leaped into my throat. I had an innate, deep-seated fear of snakes, a primal aversion that always sent shivers down my spine. This wasn't just fear; it was survival instinct. Though I couldn't identify the species, its size and stillness suggested danger. I wasn't carrying anything to ward it off, and the path was too narrow to easily circumvent it. My mind raced. If I tried to go around it, it might strike. If I stood still, it might feel threatened.

In a split second, adrenaline surged through me. My hand instinctively grabbed a thick, broken branch lying nearby. It was heavy, sturdy. Without conscious thought, driven purely by panic and a desperate need to eliminate the perceived threat, I raised the branch and brought it down with all my might.

There was a sickening thud. The snake writhed once, a violent, desperate contortion, then went limp. Its body lay twisted on the dusty ground, its once gleaming scales now dull and lifeless. A wave of nausea washed over me, mixed with a profound sense of relief. I had survived. I stood there for a moment, chest heaving, the branch still clutched in my trembling hand, staring at the motionless creature. A life had ended by my hand, an act I would usually abhor, but in that moment, it felt like an unavoidable defense.

I left the lifeless form on the path and continued my journey, my steps a little lighter, though the unsettling image lingered in my mind.

Night fell swiftly, as it always does in these remote areas. I had set up a basic camp under a cluster of ancient banyan trees, the fire crackling merrily, offering a meager comfort against the deepening chill. I was just drifting off to sleep when a faint, unnatural whisper seemed to caress my ears. It wasn't the wind, nor the rustling of leaves. It was a low, resonant hum, growing steadily louder.

Then, the air around me grew heavy, charged with an invisible energy. The embers of my fire flickered wildly, dancing as if in an unseen breeze. The shadows beneath the banyan trees deepened, swirling and coalescing into forms that were not of this world. My breath hitched in my throat.

From the deepest part of the shadows, three figures emerged. They were tall, impossibly graceful, and radiated an aura of ancient power. Their forms were fluid, almost shimmering, their eyes glowing with an intense, otherworldly light. They weren’t human. Not even close. Their presence was overwhelming, both terrifying and undeniably majestic.

I knew, instinctively, what they were. The stories, the legends, the hushed whispers of the village elders – Djinn.

They moved with unnerving silence, surrounding me. One, taller than the others, with eyes like molten gold, stepped forward. His voice, though a mere whisper, resonated in my very bones.
"You took a life today, human," he stated. "A life that was not yours to take."

My heart hammered against my ribs. "I… I didn't know," I stammered. "It was a snake. I thought it was going to attack me."

The Djinn tilted his head. "A snake, you say? And you believed it was a mere beast?"

"You killed our companion," he continued. "He was one of us. He was on a sacred journey, harming no one."

The truth hit me like a storm. I had murdered a Djinn — in ignorance, yes, but the damage was done.

"Why did you do it?" demanded another Djinn, his voice a growl. "Was it malice? Cruelty?"

"No! I was afraid. I regret it deeply. I beg you… forgive me."

The third Djinn finally spoke. "Ignorance is not always an excuse. The realms are interconnected. A hasty act in one can have consequences in another."

The leader stepped closer. "We could demand retribution. A life for a life."

I braced myself. But then, a sigh.

"You acted out of fear, not hatred. And our companion chose his form. We will spare your life. But you must carry a mark — a reminder of what lies beyond your sight."

Suddenly, pain seared my hand. I screamed. On the back of it, a pattern of glowing scales appeared, then faded to a faint tattoo. It was nearly invisible — but I could feel it burn within.

With that, the three Djinn dissolved into the shadows. The fire settled. The forest returned to silence.

I sat by the fire till dawn, shaken. The mark on my hand tingled as I walked home. From that day on, I saw the world differently — with reverence, with caution, and with the knowledge that I was never truly alone.

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About the Creator

Noman Afridi

I’m Noman Afridi — welcome, all friends! I write horror & thought-provoking stories: mysteries of the unseen, real reflections, and emotional truths. With sincerity in every word. InshaAllah.

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