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The Shadows Gave No Warning

To Hell And Back, Well, Maybe

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago 1 min read

"There was only one rule: don’t open the door.”

It was one of those random rules they threw at us that didn't seem to make any difference to the job.

See, I worked late shift at a bus station in lower Manhattan. It seemed a perfect fit since my life never really took off. After school, I tried the college thing, and just kinda ended up here, broke and alone. Now, I'm that weird 40-something checking tickets and loading bags after midnight. I looked homeless and smelled of diesel and bad cheese.

Everyone knew me, as that well-known stranger, a little misplaced and always alone. So, the job seemed well suited for me, and people let me be.

One cool October night I noticed a strange figure standing against the door we had been instructed to steer clear of. When I waved him away, he shot me a toothy grin, tipped his hat and disappeared into the shadows. I was busy loading the last bus, so I didn't think any more of it.

About 3am, as the moon pierced through the clouds, sending streams of light onto the back building, I noticed him again. He stood knee-bent, casually against the door, the red glow of his cigarette flickered as he inhaled the haloed mist. "heya, boy" he muttered. " Got a key for this thing?" He asked tapping the lock against the metal door.

"Get away from there," I warned, heading his way. As I got to the door, he was gone, but the door was ajar. Hesitating, I pushed the door open, following the trail of smoke into the darkness. The eyeless shadows encouraged me, like in a trance, further into the damp room.

As my soul was ripped away, I tried to go back, as if I could.

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    Oh wow what a good story!

  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    Beware the door that opens mysteriously, seen enough horror films?

  • Andrew C McDonaldabout a year ago

    Ice build up and a creepy antagonist. Very mysterious. Great job.

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡about a year ago

    ⚡❤️⚡

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    That's what you get when you don't follow the rules and when you listen to strangers. Great work.

  • Anna about a year ago

    Wow, horrifying piece, excellent entry! Well done!

  • Daphsamabout a year ago

    Wow, this is scary!!

  • 𝐑𝐌𝐒about a year ago

    Outstanding, Kelli! Frightening, yet all-too-realistic! Well done!

  • OMG! This was so good; I love the detail and the creepy nightshift bus scène. Fingers crossed 🤞

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