THE OAK: WHERE THE DEAD WAKE
Not everyone who checks in will ever leave…
Helen Miller did not believe in ghosts.
Not when her husband whispered to her from the grave.
Not when she saw her mother’s face in the rain-streaked window, though she had been dead for forty years.
Not when she heard the dragging sounds in the halls of The Oak, just outside her door.
Ghosts were remnants, echoes of the past. But this thing?
This thing was alive.
The First Night
The Oak Retirement Home sat on the outskirts of town, hidden among towering oaks whose gnarled branches clawed the sky like ancient fingers. The staff spoke in hushed tones, their smiles a little too still, their hands unnaturally cold.
Helen was given Room 306. The previous occupant had “passed peacefully” in his sleep.
Or so they said.
At exactly 2:13 AM, Helen awoke to a sound—wet and slow, dragging—somewhere in the corridor. It stopped outside her door.
She lay frozen, breath shallow, staring at the sliver of light beneath the door. A shadow stretched long and unnatural against the floor.
It was watching.
Something thick and dark seeped under the doorframe, the smell of rotting leaves and damp earth flooding the room.
She bit down on a scream as the whispering began.
"Helen… we are waiting."
The voices slithered through the walls, layered and inhuman, a chorus of the damned. Her fingers clawed the sheets as the darkness pressed against her, a cold weight slithering up her chest.
She closed her eyes. Pretended to sleep.
The air grew heavier. The room trembled. Then, as suddenly as it began—silence.
Morning came.
The air smelled of lavender and fresh linens. The hallway was empty. The shadows were gone.
And yet… beneath her fingernails, she found flecks of something black and wet.
The Second Night
Walter, an old man with a glassy stare, sat beside her at dinner.
"You should leave, Helen." His voice was barely a whisper. "Before The Oak takes you."
She frowned. “Takes me where?”
Walter’s hands trembled. His plate of mashed potatoes sat untouched.
"They feed it, you know… the nurses. That’s why they never leave. That’s why we never leave."
Helen’s throat tightened. “What do they feed?”
Walter’s lip curled, and he murmured something under his breath.
She barely caught it.
"Us."
The Third Night
Helen did not sleep.
She could not sleep.
Instead, she sat in her chair, scissors clutched in her bony fingers, watching the door. Waiting.
At 2:13 AM, the lights flickered.
The dragging returned—closer this time.
Helen’s breath came in shallow gasps as the handle rattled. The wood groaned, splitting like flesh under a dull blade.
A gnarled, blackened hand slipped through the widening crack. Its fingers were long, twisted at unnatural angles, each nail rusted and jagged, curling like old iron.
She could hear breathing.
Thick. Wet. Wrong.
The door snapped open.
A towering thing stood before her, bones wrapped in stretched, glistening skin, its mouth a gaping wound where lips should be. Its eyes—there were no eyes.
Only holes.
The stench of damp earth and rotting flesh filled the room as it lurched forward, dragging something behind it. A body.
Walter’s body.
His mouth sewn shut. His eyes wide, screaming without sound.
Helen’s heart slammed against her ribs. She threw the scissors, but they passed through the thing as if through smoke.
It grinned.
Then Walter moved.
Not by his own will, but by unseen hands, his body twisting, contorting, rising.
"Helen..." Walter croaked, his sewn lips splitting. "Join us."
The walls shrank inward, breathing, pulsating like living flesh. Hands—too many hands— burst from the floor, clawing at her ankles.
She screamed.
The Final Night
The paramedics found Helen’s room empty.
Her bed was made. The window was open. A faint scent of damp earth clung to the sheets.
The nurses simply smiled.
Another resident gone peacefully in the night.
Another room emptied.
Another bed, waiting.
And at 2:13 AM, the dragging began again
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Comments (9)
Brilliant ♦️♦️♦️
THE OAK: WHERE THE DEAD WAKE good article
Good story and down-right creepy and I worked at a nursing home on the night shift a long time ago.
Amazing! I love a good chilling, scary story! Fabulous ending!
Creepy mucho much. I like a good ghost story, the creepy crawlies, not so much. Great creepy crawlie this one.
I love thisssss! The ending is so unsettling with its "business as usual" tone. Really love how you constructed this one. Definitely one my "top stories" I'd love to see where it goes next!
This is suitably terrifying. It pulled me in and 'dragged' me to its unsettling, but perfect, conclusion.
Omgsh. This is amazing The ending was a perfect invitation for more to come
Ack. This gives a whole new meaning to assisted living!