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The Locked Door

A Spooky Micro Entry

By Natasja RosePublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - October 2024
The Locked Door
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There was only one rule: don’t open the door.

The rule dated back generations, to when the only actual buildings in the area were lean-to shacks, and the door was the most solid thing around. The buildings were stronger, now; stone and steel and concrete, but the old doors remained, ancient oak banded with iron.

If anyone had broken the rule in the hundreds of years between then and now, no record existed of who had done so, or of what - if anything - had happened to them as a result.

In the modern day, the Locked Door was viewed as the realm of superstitious elders, a relic of old beliefs that could be disproven with five minutes of modern science and a halfway-decent locksmith.

"I dare you."

"I double-dare you."

"You're the one bragging about your lock-picking skills."

"You're the one studying forensic science!"

"You're - look are we doing this or not? Because I have other places to be if you're just going to stand around like a wimp."

It was the accusation of being a wimp that did it. Of course it was, Desdemona had never met a teenage boy who didn't leap to action at the sound of that word.

A professional would have done it faster, but Adam had the lock clicking open with a triumphant cry within ten minutes of fiddling and not-so-muffled swearing. Desdemona caught the chains before they could clank loudly enough to give them away. "Damn, these doors are heavier than they look."

Adam tested them. "No kidding. Together?"

They each gripped a heavy iron ring. "Don't think we have much chance alone."

Old, solid oak creaked on rusted iron hinges.

The door opened.

The last thing they would ever hear was a single word, hissed in sibilant glee.

"Finally..."

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About the Creator

Natasja Rose

I've been writing since I learned how, but those have been lost and will never see daylight (I hope).

I'm an Indie Author, with 30+ books published.

I live in Sydney, Australia

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  • Jason “Jay” Benskinabout a year ago

    Nice work! Congrats on TS!!!

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Its better to let your audience imagine something more scary very good

  • Jamye Sharpabout a year ago

    Nice! Just the hint. Nothing specific, to let the reader imagination run wild.

  • Doris J Palmaabout a year ago

    Wow

  • Congratulatons on Top Story!

  • Altum Veritasabout a year ago

    Your pace is perfect for these short challenges. Nicely done!

  • Stephanie Fineourabout a year ago

    Inspiring writing.

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    This was so well written. Congratulations on the Top Story, too!

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡about a year ago

    ⚡♥️⚡

  • Elle Marieabout a year ago

    Chilling! A well-earned top story.

  • Stephanie Hoogstadabout a year ago

    What a fantastic ending! It leaves the reader hanging but in a way that feels complete for the story. I could actually see this as the beginning of a longer story, though, if you wanted to pursue it.

  • Call Me Lesabout a year ago

    Oh that's brilliant! I love the ending. I always struggle with ending micro fictions but this was perfect 🎉 well done!!

  • K. Kocheryanabout a year ago

    Nice job with the characters in this one!

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    Very well-told story! Love it.

  • Joe Pattersonabout a year ago

    Great Entry.

  • Testabout a year ago

    You unlock the door of human curiosity in a masterful way, and it now waits to be fed further to be liberated from superstitions and to envision an ending that is gnawed at.

  • Great take on the challenge, very spooky

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