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The House That Breathed

Some Places Are Alive in Terrifying Ways

By Sudais ZakwanPublished about 2 hours ago 3 min read

The old house at the edge of Darrow Village had been abandoned for decades. Children whispered about it in hushed tones, claiming that at night, shadows moved behind the cracked windows and strange sounds echoed from within. No one dared enter, not even the bravest teenagers. It wasn’t just old; it felt alive, as though the house had memories—dark, hungry memories that waited for someone foolish enough to cross its threshold.

Yet one rainy evening, curiosity drew a group of four friends—Zara, Bilal, Areeb, and Sana—toward the house. They had been teasing each other all week, boasting about who had the courage to explore it. When they reached the gate, the iron hinges creaked loudly, sending a chill down their spines. The air smelled damp and strange, like a mix of mold and smoke. They hesitated, but Zara, determined to prove herself fearless, pushed the door open.

Inside, the house was darker than they had imagined. The wooden floorboards groaned under their weight, and cobwebs brushed their faces as they moved. The walls were covered in faded wallpaper, torn in many places, and the air felt heavy, almost suffocating. Every sound they made echoed strangely, as if the house itself were listening.

Areeb tried to laugh, but his voice sounded weak and distant. “It’s just a house,” he said, though even he did not believe his words. The others nodded silently, uneasy but unwilling to show fear.

As they explored, they noticed small details that seemed impossible. Footsteps in the dust that didn’t match theirs. Shadows moving just beyond their vision. Whispered voices that vanished the moment they turned their heads. Zara shivered but pressed on, insisting there was nothing dangerous here—yet the unease in her chest grew heavier with every step.

They reached the staircase, which spiraled up into darkness. Each step creaked violently, and the air grew colder. At the top, a long corridor stretched ahead, lined with doors that looked like they had been sealed for years. Bilal reached out to open one, but the handle was icy, almost alive, and he recoiled. A sudden gust of wind slammed the door open on its own, revealing a room covered in black stains that seemed to pulse subtly, as if breathing.

Sana screamed. “We should leave!” she cried, but before they could move, the shadows in the room shifted. They weren’t just shadows—they had shapes, almost human, stretching and twisting in ways that defied physics. A whisper came, cold and sharp: “Why are you here?”

The group froze. The walls seemed to close in, the floorboards groaned, and the house seemed to inhale. It was aware of them, aware of every heartbeat. Every instinct screamed to run, but the front door had disappeared. The way they came in was gone. They were trapped.

Zara tried to remain calm. “We stick together,” she said, though her voice trembled. They moved down the hall, and with every step, the darkness seemed thicker, pressing against their skin. Objects moved on their own—an old chair rolled across the floor, a painting fell with a loud crash, and the air filled with faint, anguished whispers.

Suddenly, a shadow lunged at Areeb. He screamed and fell, but when they looked back, there was nothing there. The house had tricked him, but the terror was real. Each of them felt something crawling under their skin, a sensation of being watched, hunted, and hunted again. Their minds struggled to understand what was happening.

One by one, they climbed out of the window into the storm. Behind them, the house groaned, almost mournful, as though disappointed that its new visitors had survived. Wet, shivering, and shaken, they ran back to the village without looking behind them.

That night, none of them slept. Each could still feel the house watching from the edge of the forest. Even now, they knew it was waiting, breathing, alive. Some houses are just walls and wood, they told themselves. But this one… this one was something far older, far hungrier, and far more dangerous.

And deep down, they knew one day, someone else would enter—and the house would be ready to remember.

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About the Creator

Sudais Zakwan

Sudais Zakwan – Storyteller of Emotions

Sudais Zakwan is a passionate story writer known for crafting emotionally rich and thought-provoking stories that resonate with readers of all ages. With a unique voice and creative flair.

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