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One last time...

Rachel visiting home after years

By DhivyaPublished 3 years ago 2 min read

It had been years since Rachel last visited her childhood home, a sprawling Victorian mansion in the countryside. Her parents had passed away years ago and the house had been abandoned ever since. But now, on a whim, she had decided to make the journey back and see if the place still held any memories.

As she drove up the long, winding driveway, she felt a chill run down her spine. The house looked exactly as she remembered it, but there was a strange aura of foreboding about the place. The windows were boarded up and the garden was overgrown, but she couldn't shake the feeling that she was being watched.

Rachel entered the house and was immediately struck by the musty smell that filled the air. The furniture was covered in dust and cobwebs, and the walls were peeling and moldy. But there was something else in the air, a sense of unease that made her hair stand on end.

As she explored the house, she came across a room she had never seen before. The door was slightly ajar, and she could hear the faint sound of someone crying. Curiosity getting the better of her, she pushed the door and was met with a scene that would haunt her for the rest of her life.

In the center of the room stood a ghostly figure, tears streaming down her face. The figure looked up and fixed Rachel with a mournful gaze, before disappearing into thin air. Rachel screamed and ran from the room, her heart pounding in her chest.

For the next few days, Rachel was plagued by strange dreams and ghostly sightings. Every night she was visited by the figure from the room, who would whisper cryptic messages in her ear and leave her feeling more frightened than ever.

Desperate for answers, Rachel decided to speak to the local priest, who told her the history of the house. It had been built by a wealthy couple who had lost their only daughter in a tragic accident. The couple had been so consumed by grief that they had locked themselves in the room where the accident had taken place, never to emerge again.

The priest explained that the ghostly figure was the couple's daughter, who was still trapped in the room, longing to be free. Rachel realized that the only way to lay the spirit to rest was to enter the room one last time and say goodbye.

With a heavy heart, Rachel returned to the house and made her way to the room. As she opened the door, she was met with a blast of freezing air that made her gasp. In the center of the room stood the ghostly figure, tears still streaming down her face.

With a sense of purpose, Rachel walked towards the figure, who looked up and fixed her with a gaze of gratitude. The figure whispered a message of thanks, before fading away into the ether. Rachel felt a weight lifted from her heart, as she realized that the spirit was finally at peace.

From that day on, the house was never troubled by ghostly sightings again, and Rachel was finally able to lay her childhood memories to rest. But for the rest of her life, she would always remember the one last time she had entered the haunted room and freed the trapped spirit.

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