Master Spooky Hayride
Don’t get on this Ride
( The end song , I dare you to listen to it very scary)
This is my first Hayride Party I went to. I get scared easily. Why did I tag along ???
I feel like Scooby Doo. Do you know Scooby Doo music that play with the fog horn?
Warning you not to go on this ride!!!!! It cold damp and foggy, can’t see anything ahead.....
(Every passagers have a ear pod on to listen to the music , the station is called Party hayride of Horrors , while on the ride.)
Fallowed by the Organ playing as we enter the deep forest. Warning me my last chance to get off the ride and Plastic snakes falling from the trees .I start hugging the person next to me . Epic Halloween Organ Solo /Toccata in D Minor / Richard Elliott with thunder sound affects.
I start hearing Tyler Perry Boo 1 and 2 music playlist. It so happen it’s a full moon tonight. Full Moon Tonight by Silvastone feat. Kell Waikiki
And we have the “It” soundtrack music the most scariest sound of all
Water Tower Music by Benjamin Wallfisch . You know something scary is about to happen. Ahhh....
I got so scared, I was holding on to something hairy, No where to go. I let go of the hairy thing and just sat there frozen. I did not want to look anywhere.
Why did I do a dare???? Going on a hayride Party with no friends and nobody, I know. At least, I am dressed warmly. Why is the person next to me so hairy?
I will survive this hayride, I have an hour of spookiness to go.
The driver of the tractor told us to get off. He look like the Adams Family Butler only scarier and more skinny. A few rotten teeth going on there.
I stare so hard at him like he was my lifeline. The other passengers was making hissing sound like Zombies when they were getting off. The Only light I see is the entrance way to the tent. I gotten closed to the passenger in front of me. I felt flesh in the hole part of its clothes, Is this person wearing a costume?
Did I tell you, there were some chainsaws noise coming from the tent.( That’s where we were supposed to get the refreshments.) I am questioning myself do I really want to go inside this tent? Sound like people are screaming inside the tent. It sound like we might be the refreshments.
The driver of the tractor told us in order to get out of here we must go thru the tent first. He will met us on the other side of the tent. I know, I really have no choice now. The driver last words before I get off the hayride, “ If you ever make it out of the tent.” Is he just looking at me ? He made it seem like he was just talking directly to me, only.
I give myself a pep talk, “ I can do this, this is not real even if it feels real.”
At least there is some light in the tent. There first thing , I saw was a creepy clown greeting everyone at the tent entry way. He keep telling everyone who enter you are not going to make it out of here. It was my turn to enter the tent. The clown’s one eye was red and the other eye was bleeding. He stare straight at me. The Clown said, “ Savanna , you are not going to make it out of this tent Alive.” I told the clown, “ We see about that.” I enter the tent and heard people in front of me screaming and chainsaws cutting somethings. I start running like a bat out of hell.
Everything was a blur but some how I made it out of that tent. The tractor driver was surprised to see me. He said ,” You made it out.” I few people was able to get back on the hayride. Some of them are missing some of their limbs. I did not dare look at them.
The tractor driver said “ Next and last stop , The Corn maze. No one ever get out of there Alive.” Again he stare straight at me.
Another warning from the Tractor driver, “ We are entering dangerous ground stay away from the edge. There is something out there snatching people from the hayride wagon.” The pathway of the hayride is adjacent to the “River of Doom”. As soon as he said that, The hairy creature was drag off the hayride wagon from above, into the foggy river of doom.
“ Last stop, the corn maze, you better start running.” Said the Tractor Driver. “ The Zombies are coming.” Someone was shouting from the corn maze. I wanted to stay on the hayride wagon. The Tractor driver seem to read my mind. “ If you don’t get off here, The end will be the pet cemetery.”Do you here the song “Pet Sematary “by Ramona?
I enter the corn maze , which way do I go. I hear something howling in the maze. What am I to do? A little lady wearing white with long black hair. I cannot see her face. She keep pointing , she is telling me to go in that direction? That direction looks like a dead end to me. Do I dare go where she tell me to go? I fallow the the direction of the little lady in white who turn around ,looking like a creepy doll face . I finally woke up from a spooky dream. I will end this story with the scariest music, I dare you to listen. Annabelle Soundtrack from (Theme Song -Epic Music)-Musique film Annabelle3 (2019)
I hope this did not scare you. Hearted if it scared you at the end song. Did you dare listen to it ?
About the Creator
Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Comments (6)
Too horrific!!! Well done, Mariann!!!💕❤️❤️
Loved the way you wove this together! So well done. Sign me up for this hayride
Lol, it sounded like we're the refreshments 🤣🤣🤣 That was funny! I wish I can go on this ride! Also, I love the Annabelle music!
Oh Mariann, they want you to use the BEAT community for this. You used HORROR.
I just tried my hand at scary too. Wondering if I should post it. It seems silly. But I will take a leap since yours is so good, maybe no one will notice mine, hahahahahahahah. 😥🤩😎😣
I have already read this so can't give you another read , but I can leave insights and comments and listening to the Annabelle end title now , great piece