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How To Be A Good Wife?

Being a good wife means something different to every woman

By Dharrsheena Raja SegarranPublished 11 months ago 3 min read
Top Story - February 2025
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“Look, I stopped telling you what to do because you hate it when I nag you, but this was something that you wanted!”
 
Evric rolled his eyes and groaned, “I said I will do it and I’ll do it when I want to! Jeez!”
 
“But it’s been two weeks since you said that. As your wife, I need to be supportive of your goals and make sure you achieve them”, reasoned Bianca.
 
“There you go again, guilt tripping me!”
 
Bianca gasped, “Guilt tripping you?! Do you even hear yourself?!”
 
“Any good wife would just let me be! Let me do my own thing at my own pace! Why is it always a rush with you? Don’t you understand that I need to be ready and prepared to do it?”
 
“Yes, I understand that”, explained Bianca, “But you’ve already bought everything that is necessary for you to do it. Seems prepared enough to me.”
 
Evric looked at his wife in utter disbelief, “Mentally! I need to be prepared mentally to do it as well!”
 
“I don’t understand. You had two weeks to do that.”
 
“I was thinking of ways to do it effectively and I was out purchasing the things needed. You know I don’t multitask well.”
 
“Yes, I’m sorry about that.”
 
“Schizophrenia is so difficult to deal with. So, please cut me some slack”, pleaded Evric.
 
Shocked would be an understatement to what Bianca felt.
 
Evric knew what she was thinking, “I’m sorry Bia, I should have told you sooner. I was diagnosed a few months ago. That’s why I decided that it’s about time that I do it. I think it’s for the best.”
 
“I think it’s a wonderful idea, but I wish you would have told me about this sooner. You know I’ll support whatever decision you take.”
 
“You know what? I’ll do it tonight. I think I’m ready. No, I know I’m ready!”
 
“I’m so happy for you! Please know that no matter what, I’ll always love you”
 
“I love you too, Bia”, Evric smiled and kissed her.
 
~~~~~
 
“Helium asphyxiation?”
 
“Yup, that seems to be the case, considering the helium tank and these equipments”, gestured at them Louis vaguely.
 
“What’s taking the coroner so long?” asked Gary.
 
“Beats me. Also, the wife definitely needs to be questioned. I was told she sounded very calm during the call.”
 
“Poor woman must have been in shock. I mean, who wouldn’t be if their husband committed suicide?
 
“I don’t know, Gary. It didn’t seem normal to me. She hasn’t shed a tear since we arrived and it didn’t seem like she had been crying either.”
 
“What are you trying to imp—”
 
Bianca interrupted their conversation, “I made some tea. Would you like some, Officers?”
 
Louis gave Gary a see-what-I-mean look before he addressed Bianca, “Thank you, Mrs. Luft but we need to bring you in for questioning.”
 
“Sure, I’m happy to be of help, Officer.”

~~~~~
 
“Were you at home when your husband, ummm…when he took his life?” asked Gary.
 
“Yes I was, Officer”, Bianca admitted.
 
“Were you asleep?”
 
“No, Officer.”
 
“Were you in the kitchen or some other parts of the house?”
 
“No, Officer.”
 
“Damn it! Then, where were you?!” Louis slammed his fist on the table.
 
“As a good wife, I sat beside Evric to support him and watched him do it. It only took about fifteen minutes!”
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Author's Notes

This has been sitting in my drafts for two years now. The idea of suicide by helium asphyxiation was given to me by my close friend, Bramillan Ilamaran.

Suicide by helium asphyxiation involves inhaling helium to displace oxygen, leading to unconsciousness and death due to lack of oxygen (hypoxia). It is often done using a plastic bag or mask connected to a helium tank.

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  • Janis Masyk-Jackson2 months ago

    Well I wasn't expecting that ending! Great story!

  • Expertly done, loved it!! Awesome job as usual, Dharrsheena! :)

  • Cadma5 months ago

    I’m really drawn in by the tension in your opening scene. The dialogue between Bianca and Evric already paints a vivid, emotionally charged moment that feels authentic. I especially felt Bianca’s frustration, which comes through so clearly. One idea to build on that strength: you might consider weaving in a brief inner thought or memory from Bianca to give us one more layer of connection to her. But overall, the authenticity of the voice and the immediacy of the conflict are compelling. Well done! Dark Satire has a special place in my heart.

  • Christa Leigh6 months ago

    dark satire, I love it!

  • MD NAYEM HOSSAN8 months ago

    It is such a good story! Thanks for everything.

  • Seema Patel8 months ago

    As a good wife, I supported him :) You excel in satire!

  • MD RUMAN HOSSAIN8 months ago

    Nice

  • Sarah Danaher8 months ago

    Love the wife's honesty at the end. It was a very good story

  • Ali Hassan8 months ago

    Brilliant

  • Paul Stewart8 months ago

    So old fucker Paul read this, liked it and loved it aaaages ago and forgot comment! sorry, congrats on Top Story and enjoyed how thought provoking it was!

  • Dr.abdul wahab8 months ago

    wonderful

  • Anthony Rock9 months ago

    Great article

  • Arshad Ali9 months ago

    Wonderful to read **"We want people- to have peace in their dreams. He protects them for me. That's why I say every night... O Allah, keep the one I love, well.'

  • L.C. Schäfer9 months ago

    A very fitting surname!

  • Hassan Ahmad9 months ago

    ohh

  • Gideon James9 months ago

    this is so beautiful i look forward to more of your article

  • Fathi Jalil9 months ago

    Chilling and powerful. The calmness of Bianca at the end is unsettling, and the use of helium asphyxiation adds a disturbing touch of realism. Nice story 😊

  • Seema Patel10 months ago

    Can't we manage before it goes to that extent?

  • Indian Souls10 months ago

    Great article

  • Pamela Williams10 months ago

    You have a way with words lol. Brilliant.

  • Staringale10 months ago

    Congrats on Tops Story! No words really. It is a deadly combination 'beautiful + horrifying'

  • Babs Iverson10 months ago

    Oh my!!! Horrific and brilliantly written!!! ❤️❤️💕 Congratulations on T S!!!

  • Jessica Phoenix10 months ago

    Dharr *Clap* is back *Clap* on top *Clap* again! Congrats on Top Story, Dharr!! Not surprised, honestly, lol. You have *Raw talent* (I don't have emojis, but those are sparkles). This was so funny, though-- I mean, she was just trying to be a good wife, LOL. Thanks for liking my friend's story, by the way! Not sure why she hasn't responded to your comment-- I reminded her, but I think she's a bit too busy right now to do Vocal. Hey, could we be Vocal friends? Like, we don't know each other in real life, but it would be nice to have someone to "hang out" with here. You don't have to, lol. Just a suggestion, because you're fun and your stories are really good!

  • TheSpinstress 10 months ago

    I somehow knew what his goal was before we got to the reveal. I guess I have a lot of experience of how your mind works by now. 😁 Great story!

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