Disappear
The Door under the Stairs
There was only one rule: don’t open the door. I didn’t know why, and I didn’t question it. Not at first anyway. There was this tugging feeling that I had every time I looked at the oak slab under the stairs, its polished brass knob tempting me. It was easy enough to ignore, but then came the rattling, as if someone was desperately trying to get out. It was startling every time, but it eventually subsided to a light knocking. Fear turned into curiosity as the craving to know what laid behind it grew and grew.
One early morning, while I was tidying up the kitchen, my ears twitched at the sound of someone calling out from behind the door. Let me out? It’s dark in here. It sounded like a little girl, maybe no older than ten, and she sounded scared, her voice pleading. I remembered a dream I’d had about a little girl, my daughter, calling out from behind the door. It was so vivid, it could have been a memory, and maybe it was. Temptation grew, and I slowly reached for the knob, but pulled back, remembering their one rule. Mommy? Are you gonna let me out? My heart ached at the pleading notes in her tone, and I felt I had to help her. I reached out for the handle once more and turned…
There was only one rule: don’t open the door. I’d had a dream about having a roommate being trapped behind the door. It was so vivid, I thought that it might have been a memory, but I waved it off as my own mind playing tricks on me. Then I heard her calling out from behind the door under the stairs.
About the Creator
Gunnar Anderson
Author of The Diary of Sarah Jane and The Diary of Sarah Jane: Between the Lines. Has a bachelor's degree in English from Arizona State University and currently resides in Phoenix with his wife and daughter who inspire him daily.



Comments (13)
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Wow. This is so powerful and well-written. It’s also very unique compared to other entries I’ve read.
Nice work,nice work!
This was a good fright, well done!
I want to read more....
Sua história tem um ótimo clima de suspense e tensão psicológica, com um enredo intrigante sobre uma porta que não deve ser aberta e as vozes que tentam persuadir o narrador a quebrar essa única regra. Há uma atmosfera de mistério que envolve tanto o narrador quanto o leitor, criando uma curiosidade crescente sobre o que, ou quem, está por trás da porta.
That was such a creepy ending! Great stuff.
OOOOO that ending was pretty disconcerting! Very creepy!
Such a scary and horrific bit of micro fiction. Splendid response to the given prompt. Congratulations, too, on the Top Story - it's well-earned.
Wow, this is eerie! Very good job!
Call Me Les is right, this would be an excellent movie. Nicely done!
I wish this was a movie. I could see the potential for a longer plot and the struggle with the voice. Very psychological!
Interesting premise!