The Muffled War
On the Western Front, the silence of a midnight snowfall could be more terrifying than the roar of guns.

Arthur’s breath hitched, a ragged white cloud dissolving into the black that was the Western Front, winter of '16. The cold had a grip that clawed deep into his bones, past the threadbare wool of his greatcoat, past the layers of lice-ridden tunic, right into the marrow. He shifted his weight, trying to coax feeling back into his feet, jammed tight into boots that had seen too much mud, too much blood. The trench wall behind him, a mess of sandbags and frozen earth, offered no comfort. Just the smell. Always the smell. Rot, damp wool, cordite, fear. Tonight, though, a new scent was creeping in, clean and sharp, like something remembered from a world long gone.
Then he saw it. Not heard, but saw. A single, hesitant flake drifting past the rim of his helmet. Then another. And another. Soon, the black air was thick with them, swirling, dancing, catching the faint, sickly glow from a distant flare that momentarily painted the sky a ghastly green. The flakes were fat, lazy things, tumbling without a hint of wind. They landed on his eyelashes, dissolving into icy pinpricks. They landed on the mud-caked parapet, softening the harsh edges, turning the scarred landscape into something unrecognizably gentle. The mud in the trench bottom, a perpetual, sucking curse, began to accumulate a thin, pristine blanket.
The world began to quiet. First, the distant thrum of artillery, usually a constant, vibrating presence in the gut, became a duller rumble, like thunder from a different country. The scrape of a boot further down the line, the incessant scuttling of rats, the coughs and muffled curses of the men trying to sleep in their dugouts – all of it faded, absorbed by the falling snow. It was a silence Arthur hadn't known since he left his mother's farm two years ago. A profound, unsettling hush. It made his own breathing sound impossibly loud, a ragged gasp in the sudden, cottony stillness.
“Bloody hell, Art, you frozen solid yet?” Tom’s voice, a low gravel, cut through the quiet. He emerged from the shadows of the next dugout, pulling his own greatcoat tighter, a half-smoked cigarette glowing ember-red between his chapped lips. Tom was older, his face a roadmap of hard lines and shadows, eyes that had seen too much. He didn't look up at the snow, not like Arthur did. He just scanned the barbed wire, the no-man's-land beyond, his rifle held loosely, ready.
“Nah,” Arthur managed, his voice a creak. “Just… listening.” Tom grunted, a sound of dismissive amusement. “Listening for what, boy? A bloody lullaby? It’ll just make the ground harder to dig into, come morning. And give those Hun bastards cover.” He spat, the spittle vanishing into the snow. But even Tom, with all his cynicism, seemed to temper his movements, his voice a little softer, as if fearing to break the spell. The silence felt heavy, a physical weight pressing down, pressing in. It wasn't peaceful. Not here. It was a vacuum, a held breath, where every sound, every whisper, would echo like a gunshot.
A flare shot up then, hissing skyward, blossoming into a searing white sun. It illuminated everything. The falling snow, millions of crystalline specks suspended in air, each one perfectly formed. The skeletal remains of trees in no-man's-land, like jagged teeth against the white. The glint of ice on the barbwire. And the frozen, contorted shapes that were once men, lying out there, now covered in a shroud of pure white. For a moment, it was beautiful, in a stark, horrifying way. Then the flare sputtered, died, plunging them back into deeper, denser darkness, the silence returning with a vengeance, thick and suffocating.
Arthur gripped his rifle, the cold steel biting into his gloved fingers. The quiet was worse than the shelling. It left too much room for thought. Too much room for memory. The warmth of the kitchen fire, the clatter of plates, his sister’s laugh. All gone, swallowed by this endless, silent white. Tom leaned close, his breath warm on Arthur’s ear. “Hear that, Art?” Arthur strained, listening. Nothing. Just the blood rushing in his own ears. “What?” he whispered back, dread coiling in his gut.
“Nothing,” Tom said, a grim smirk playing on his lips. “That’s the bloody point. Too quiet. Always means they’re up to something, or we are.” He straightened, adjusting his grip on his rifle. “Keep your eyes peeled. The Huns ain’t got no poetry in 'em, not like this snow. They’ll use it for cover, same as us.” The thought was a cold, hard stone in Arthur’s stomach. He stared out into the swirling white, the world utterly transformed, stripped of its familiar horrors, yet somehow made even more menacing by its profound, unnatural quiet. The snowflakes melted against his frozen cheeks, cold and indifferent, just like the war, just like the coming dawn.
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