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The Golden Cave.

They called it the Whispering Mountain.

By Ahmed KarimPublished 10 months ago 4 min read
They called it the Whispering Mountain.

A cave that no one dared approach was high in the misty hills of an old, forgotten village. The elders spoke of it only in whispers, saying it was cursed—guarded by spirits who punished the greedy.But they also said it held something else:gold, more than any man had ever seen.

Arjun had heard the stories since childhood. Now twenty-eight and restless from city life, he returned to the village after his grandfather’s death.In the attic of the old wooden house, he discovered a dusty chest—inside was a brittle map, a faded journal, and a note written in shaky hand:

“To whoever finds this: the cave is real. With my own eyes, I saw the gold, but I couldn't take it. Not with them watching.”

Arjun's pulse quickened. The journal described the journey up Whispering Mountain, the cave entrance hidden behind a curtain of vines, and a warning: “Not all that glitters should be touched.”

He knew he had to see it for himself.

The Journey Commences Arjun began the climb at dawn with only a backpack, flashlight, and his grandfather's map. The mountain path was steep and overgrown. The air grew colder, and the usual chirps of birds faded into silence. He reached the vine curtain precisely where the map indicated it would be after hours of climbing. He left it behind and entered darkness. His flashlight started blinking. The walls shimmered with veins of gold. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something metallic. Arjun carefully followed the map as he made his way through the winding tunnels. He had no idea that someone was watching him. The Guardians

He felt more out of place the further he went. There were no words, just sounds that echoed off the walls, like wind blowing through bones. He reached a vast chamber where the walls glittered like starlight. A golden idol was perched on a stone pedestal in the center. It was small, shaped like a bird with emerald eyes. It was almost alive and pulsated with an odd warmth. He reached for it—then froze.

A low growl rolled through the chamber. From the shadows emerged a pair of glowing eyes, then another, and another. With their lips curled into snarls, three jackals with silver fur and black claws advanced. But they didn’t attack. They circled him slowly, watching.

Arjun remembered the journal. “They watch. They judge.

The creatures became still as he backed away from the idol. When he stepped forward again, they growled louder.

He understood. He could not take the gold. The Decision But Arjun was not ready to leave empty-handed.

He moved away from the pedestal and looked through a small opening at the chamber's edge.It led to a lower level—cooler, darker. He discovered piles of gold coins, jewelry, and ancient artifacts there, the real treasure. More than he could ever carry.

Human bones, however, were scattered among the gold, appearing to have been thrown or clawed at. Some still wore rotting backpacks.

Others had tried to steal it.

He picked up a single coin. The whispers grew louder. The cave trembled slightly. The golden jackals appeared again, blocking his path. Their eyes weren’t angry now—they were sorrowful.

One of them walked forward and placed a single claw on his chest. He remembered seeing his younger grandfather making the same decision while standing in the same cave, dropping the gold, and then leaving. Arjun extended his hand. The coin clattered to the ground.

The jackals bowed their heads, then vanished into the shadows.

The Real Treasure

As Arjun turned to leave, a soft hum filled the air. A wall at the far end of the cave shimmered, revealing a hidden doorway. He stepped through and found a quiet chamber, no gold, no bones. Just a stone table, and on it, a book.

Leather and gold were used to make the ancient but perfectly preserved cover. He opened it.

Inside were maps, lost languages, forgotten stories, and the wisdom of civilizations long gone. This was knowledge rather than wealth. It felt sacred.

A voice whispered in his ear, not threatening now, but calm:

"Greed goes away. Knowledge endures. He understood. The real treasure wasn’t gold—it was what the cave protected: the memory of those who came before, and the warnings they left behind.

The Return

When Arjun returned to the village, he carried no gold. Only the book and his grandfather’s journal. The villagers scoffed—another fool who came back empty-handed. But Arjun didn’t argue.

He gave the book to a university under a fictitious name, and it became a topic of worldwide research. Historians marveled at the accuracy of its ancient scripts. Linguists decoded forgotten languages. A generation of knowledge was reborn.

As years passed, Arjun never spoke of the cave again. However, from time to time, he would ascend the mountain trail, stand in front of the vine curtain, and leave a single flower at the entrance. He never went in again. He didn’t need to.

Epilogue

Years later, a young girl from the village, curious and bold like Arjun once was, found the same map and journal in an old library archive. She was in awe as she gazed up at the mountain. Somewhere deep in the cave, the golden jackals stirred.

They were still watching.

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