Who Do You Call a Loser?
For the 'Oh, Jeff' unofficial challenge
‘Oh, Jeff… I love you too… but…’
Brakes screeching, an ear-splitting crash, and we were disconnected. The police came and saw a heartbroken husband. The funeral was lovely.
I inherited everything. Everyone understood I couldn’t bear staying where each little thing reminded me of her. The house fetched a hefty sum.
The key to success? Don't give your wife time to change the will.
(64 words)
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And here is Raymond G. Taylor's unofficial challenge, feel free to check it out:
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Katarzyna Popiel
A translator, a writer. Two languages to reconcile, two countries called home.
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Please forgive the clumsy cut and paste. I would like to publish your entry (or entries) to the Oh-Jeff challenge in an upcoming book and of course need your permission to do so. Details are all here: https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/oh-jeff-the-book%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Thanks, Ray
So much story in so few words!
Oh dear… poor Jeff, again! Excellent entry ✅
WOW! Excellent work!
That was cold. But I get it. What's wrong with a bit of murder, oh dear.
Yikes that was disturbing! Brilliant!
I loved every bit of this! Nice entry, Katarzyna!
Oh snap! Quite a dramatic micro!
Nice, a little conniving and scheming behind your”loved ones” back
Oh gosh! Wow, that was good!
Nice. Grim but nice.
Ouch, a noir interpretation if ever there was won. Gripping tale and thanks for your entry
Whoa, this took a dark and twisty turn! It’s got that twisted, dark humor vibe with a pinch of suspense—like a thriller in just a few lines. A clever, sharp punchline that leaves you thinking about the character's... questionable choices.✨
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