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Whispers in the Woods

A tale of a child who discovers a hidden world in the forest, filled with magical creatures and ancient secrets

By JOHN NHYIRAPublished about a year ago 3 min read
Whispers in the Woods

She tugged on her boots and grabbed her jacket, the sun already dipping into the treetops, stretching long shadows through the trees as Ella wandered deeper into the forest behind her house. She had always felt this strange connection to these woods, though the whispers today were louder than ever. Her heart pounded in a mix of excitement and trepidation as she followed the faint murmurs, weaving through the underbrush.

The whispers all brought her to a glade she had never seen, filled with one giant oak tree. Its crooked branches reached out toward the sky while its ancient bark seemed to pulse, full of life. She felt attracted yet wary of this tree. Stepping forward, Ella placed her hand on its surface.

The whispers stopped.

"Hello?" she called softly, her voice barely above a whisper itself. The forest seemed to hold its breath.

Then, from behind the trunk of the tree, a flicker of light emerged and brightened until it took the shape of a very tiny glowing creature with delicate wings. Ella gasped, her eyes going wide in amazement.

"Hello, Ella," the creature said in a tinkling, melodic voice.

"You… you can talk?" Ella stammered.

The creature tittered, the sound like that of wind chimes. "Of course! I'm Liora. I've been waiting for you."

"For me?" Ella asked bewildered.

Liora nodded. "Yes, you're the one who can help us. Our world is in grave danger, and only someone with a pure heart can save it."

"What do I need to do?" Ella asked, fear and determination mixed in her voice.

"Follow me," Liora said, careening toward a hidden path that was sort of behind the oak tree. Ella followed her, and soon enough, she could hear her own heartbeat. As they strayed deeper, the forest appeared to change. Flowers of all colors sprouted from the sides of the path, and the trees seemed to hum with gentle energy.

The pathway ended before a shimmering portal that radiated light from another world. Liora turned to Ella. "Beyond this portal is our world, full of magic and ancient secrets. But an evil force has risen to raze it to the ground. Will you help us?" Ella took a deep breath and nodded. "Yes, I'll help.

With that, Liora dove into the portal, and Ella stepped through, feeling the warmth and light rush about her. On the other side, she found herself in a country more beautiful than she had ever seen in her imagination. The sky was brilliant blue, and the air redolent with flowers in bloom. Creatures of magic roamed, and Ella felt deep wonder.

She then took Ella to a very big castle made purely of crystal, where the Queen of that magical land waited. The tall, regal Queen explained the grievous condition: "A dark sorcerer is draining the magic from our land. Only someone with a pure heart will be able to find and destroy his source of power."

Ella nodded. The weight of her mission suddenly rested on her. "I will do anything to save your world.".

Armed with a magic amulet and Liora by her side, Ella traveled across the land of magic. She passed through trials as diverse as solving ancient riddles to confronting tenebrous creatures. She found strengths, talents within her that she had never known existed.

Finally, Ella arrived at the sorcerer's den, where her wit and undaunted courage outsmarted him. And with one final, mighty blow in its own right, she destroyed the source of his power, restoring peace and magic to the land.

The creatures of the magical realm rejoiced at Ella's victory. The Queen granted her a shining crown, saying, "You are our hero, Ella. Thank you for saving our world.".

As Ella stepped back through the portal into her home, she knew nothing would ever be the same again. She found another world that was hidden, and in doing so, she discovered herself. Whispers in the woods had led her into an adventure worth remembering forever.

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JOHN NHYIRA

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  • Alyssa wilkshoreabout a year ago

    Excellent writing

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