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Whispering Sand

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By Moharif YuliantoPublished 2 years ago 3 min read
Whispering Sand
Photo by Heather Shevlin on Unsplash

The wind sang a mournful song, a desert dirge, as it sculpted the endless dunes of Erg Chebbi. The sand, a sea of sun-baked gold, stretched as far as the eye could see, rippling in whispering waves under the relentless sun. Here, in this vast emptiness, lived Zahra, a woman etched by the desert's harsh beauty.

Zahra, with eyes the color of sun-bleached clay and skin weathered like ancient parchment, was a weaver. But she didn't weave with threads of silk or wool. Her loom was the wind, her yarn the whispering sand. Under the dome of a cobalt sky, she'd sit on a flat rock, a weathered silver bracelet adorning her calloused wrist, and with practiced hands, draw patterns in the sand.

Each intricate design, a swirling dance of lines and circles, held a story. Stories whispered to her by the wind, secrets gleaned from the shifting dunes. Tales of ancient caravans lost in sandstorms, of nomads who found solace in the desert's embrace, of lonely stars weeping tears of starlight. Tourists, drawn by the allure of the Sahara, often stumbled upon Zahra. They'd watch in fascination as her hands danced, conjuring ephemeral art on the ever-changing canvas.

One day, a young man named Omar, with eyes the color of deep desert pools, stood mesmerized by Zahra's artistry. He'd come from the bustling city, seeking respite from its cacophony. He approached Zahra cautiously, his voice a gentle breeze in the stillness.

"What are you making?" he asked.

Zahra, startled, looked up. Her gaze, wise and ancient, met his. "I weave stories, young man," she spoke, her voice as dry and raspy as the desert winds. "Stories the sands whisper to me."

Omar, intrigued, spent the afternoon with Zahra. He learned of the djinn who danced in the sandstorms, of the hidden oases where desert flowers bloomed in defiance of the harsh environment. He felt a connection to Zahra - a sense that she understood the yearnings of his restless soul.

Days turned into weeks, and Omar became a regular visitor. He sat with Zahra, listening to the stories woven in sand, their shared silence punctuated only by the wind's mournful song. One day, as the sun dipped below the horizon, painting the sky in hues of orange and red, Omar spoke.

"I must return to the city soon," he confessed.

Zahra nodded, a flicker of sadness in her eyes.

"This place holds a piece of my heart now," Omar continued. "What will remind me of these stories, of the desert's magic?"

Zahra reached for a small pouch hidden in her robes and pulled out a smooth, flat stone. It was a piece of petrified wood, once a living tree, now captured forever in a state of stone.

"Take this," she said, her voice soft. "When you look upon it, you will hear the whispers of the sand, feel the desert wind on your face."

Omar took the stone, its coolness a comforting contrast to the desert heat. He thanked Zahra, his words laced with a longing he couldn't quite express.

Back in the city, life resumed its hurried pace. But Omar couldn't shake off the lingering call of the desert. He kept the petrified wood on his desk, a constant reminder of the quiet magic he'd found in the Sahara. Every time he touched it, he heard Zahra's stories, felt the prickling heat of the desert sun.

One day, a strange restlessness overwhelmed Omar. He quit his job, packed a bag, and took a bus back to the desert. He arrived at the familiar spot where he'd spent hours with Zahra, but she was gone. Her loom lay abandoned, the wind whipping sand across it, slowly erasing her last creation.

Disappointment gnawed at Omar, but then he spotted a faint outline in the sand. It was a symbol, a recurring element in Zahra's stories – a depiction of a lone star.

Hope flickered within him. He knew Zahra wouldn't have left without leaving a message. Omar spent hours meticulously clearing the sand around the symbol, revealing a barely visible inscription beneath. It read: "Follow the lone star, seek the oasis lost in time."

With a surge of excitement, Omar consulted his compass. He remembered Zahra once mentioning a hidden oasis, a place untouched by the harsh desert sun. The symbol pointed in a direction he hadn't explored before. It was a long journey, fraught with danger, but the thought of finding Zahra, or perhaps even a glimpse of the lost oasis, propelled him forward.

Fantasy

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Moharif Yulianto

a freelance writer and thesis preparation in his country, youtube content creator, facebook

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