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Trapped in a Living Nightmare

A Descent into Horror

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 2 years ago 2 min read
Photo Credit: https://deadentertainment.com/2020/02/27/hooked-stabbed-and-trapped-top-10-women-deaths-in-horror/

The place smelled deeply and powerfully of rotting. Sara's eyes darted over the dimly lit cellar's stone walls and shadows cast by a single, fluttering lightbulb that made for frightening figures. She could see the constant flow of water in the silence, each drop a harsh reminder of time passing. She made an effort to break free, but the ropes securing her wrists and ankles were so tight that her flesh bled.

As she peered into the shadows, she heard a low, rumbling noise. Her heart raced as she saw someone s

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lowly emerge from the shadows. The man's face was warped and contorted, his eyes dead and empty, and his mouth unusually large, revealing rows of rotting, uneven teeth. His clothes were torn and filthy, and dried blood was all over his hands.

"You woke up," he said in a scary way, sending shivers down her spine. Excellent. I adore how they are starting to awaken.

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Sara gasped for breath, short and scared, as she struggled against her restraints. As he drew closer, she could see the rusty scalpel glinting in his palm. Despite her mind racing nonstop, she was unable to think of a way out.

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He took hold of her chin and forced her to look into his fierce eyes. "Let's begin," he said, bringing the knife down to her cheek. The pain was intense and acute as the sword tore into her flesh. The gag was in her mouth, muffled her screams.

She let out more agonizing tears as he continued to carve intricate drawings into her skin. He whistled a tune that seemed oddly cheerful as he worked. Blood gushed from her face as she hit the hard concrete floor.

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As the pain worsened, Sara's vision blurred. He gave her a slap across the face just as she was ready to faint, waking her from her trance. It scorched her ear and he said, "Stay with me," under his breath. "We're not done yet."

With a steady precision, he then shifted his attention to her arms and sliced her forearms. Her body shook and her nerves cried out in agony with every new wound. The room whirled around her, and she wished the blackness would consume her.

But he refused to let her go. He took great pleasure in her suffering and worked hard to keep her awake. It felt as though hours—or minutes—passed in slow motion. The pain was a never-ending assault on her senses. Ultimately, he stood back and appreciated his creation. He cut Sara's body into a tapestry of pain and blood, showcasing his horrible talent. She was barely hanging on to life, gasping for air.

Photo Credit: https://deadentertainment.com/2020/02/27/hooked-stabbed-and-trapped-top-10-women-deaths-in-horror/.

He bent down and drew closer to her, his face hardly visible. He said, "What lovely work." "But every masterpiece needs a final touch."

With that, he slowly twisted the scalpel and plunged it into her chest. Her eyes went white with pain as her life was coming to an end. She heard his laughter echoing down the basement like a distorting love ballad, right before she was completely engulfed by the darkness.

Photo Credit: https://deadentertainment.com/2020/02/27/hooked-stabbed-and-trapped-top-10-women-deaths-in-horror/.

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Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Amy littleabout a year ago

    Nice read.

  • Kennedy Smithabout a year ago

    The photos you used are really scary

  • Shelby about a year ago

    Wonderful

  • Murali2 years ago

    Your photo choice gives me nightmares.

  • Milrose samboque2 years ago

    Scary haha but I love reading it. Thanks for sharing

  • John Baxter2 years ago

    So creepy yet very interesting, thanks for sharing

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