Timothy
Rebecca, an author, has an unexpected visitor. | Submission for Belle's Unofficial Conviction Challenge
My fingers inch closer to the keyboard, itching to obliterate a day's worth of work. It's some of my best writing I've done to date, but at what cost? The words seem to bleed, dripping onto my desk. For a millisecond, I'm sitting in front of a crime scene, looking at dead, begging eyes. Why? Why me?
Suddenly, I aggressively slam down the laptop, snapping me out of the nightmare. The paranoia in me screams about the potential damage, but really, I would rather deal with it in the morning. My stomach grumbles a reminder to eat some dinner, giving me even more reason to run as far away from computer, if only for tonight. The damage will still be there in the morning.
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After shoveling my dinner, I jump into my sauna of a shower, desperate to sweat...scrub the ickiness seeping into my bones. Even after I'm clean and the water begins to cool, I stay under the spray, ensuring its complete dissipation.
An ear-splitting creak interrupts my self-imposed purging session. Though I live alone and am positive it was only a side-effect of a drafty house, my nerves get the better of me.
"Hello?!" The only response is the groaning of a door. My skin starts to crawl with the feeling of eyes spying from underneath the door. Like every cliched horror film, I take a quick peek around the curtain. The door had popped from its latch and swung open, a common occurrence in this house.
Laughing bitterly, I turn off the water and yank the towel off the rack. I braid up my hair, deciding sleep was more important than a dry pillow.
As I tangle myself in my sheets, I try to reassure myself. I did what I had to do. Unfortunately, the popular side character from my series, Timothy will be another casualty in the long chess-like game of writing, but death can't always be avoided, even in a fantasy world.
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I don't know when my rumbling thoughts shut up long enough for me to doze off, but I wake up knowing something's wrong. As I try to sit up, my mind snaps completely awake as I realize I'm not only sitting up already, but am bound to a rickety chair from my kitchen.
My head whips around, taking in my surroundings, as I attempt to break myself loose. A bright light abruptly turns on, temporarily blinding me. Once my eyes adjust, I recognize my living room and notice I'm positioned directly in front of my desk where my laptop sits open. I'm close enough to see the print, a chunk of the scene that has twisted my stomach in knots.
A pair of hands grips the back of my chair tightly before I hear breathing over my left shoulder. "Why are you killing me off, Rebecca?"
How...this isn't possible. "Timothy?"
To be continued.....
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This story is inspired by Belle's Unofficial Challenge: The Conviction, linked below:
About the Creator
Alexandria Stanwyck
My inner child screams joyfully as I fall back in love with writing.
I am on social media! (Discord, Facebook, and Instagram.)
instead of therapy: poetry and lyrics about struggling and healing is available on Amazon.
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters




Comments (13)
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The results for this challenge will be posted shortly. They are ready to publish, and have been for the last couple days, but I am having issues saving and publishing! I just wanted to update to let you know that they are finished, just trying to get around a bug! Thank you so much for your patience. <3<3
This is brilliant, Alexandria! It's a kind of writer's horror that brings a smile to my face. Almost a Stephen King's "Misery" kind of feeling. That the events in your writing can actually come back and haunt you, although in Misery's case, it was a karma kind of haunting, where this one it much more literal. Astounding! I would like to apologize for the lateness of this challenge. Honestly, I'm appalled myself with how preoccupied I have been, though I am thankful to be given some free time... The results will soon be posted, and I will notify you shortly! Thank you so much for entering!
Excellent story. Very intriguing. I look forward to reading more!
Great work and congrats on TS!
This is absolutely amazing! You're story-telling tactivs are over top! Keep going!
It's like I was there! Very compelling bit of writing, also a really cool idea. Fantastically told! Well deserved top story, I look forward to seeing where Belle places this!
truly commendable congratulations on TS
Love your storytelling talent. Keep up the good work.
Congratulations 🎉. Keep up the fantastic work 👍.
The tension was so good here!! I was on the edge of my seat the entire way through. Awesome work!
Loved your fantastic storytelling!!!❤️❤️💕
hahahahahaha your character is angry with you. Good one!