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The Wisping Wind

A Microfiction

By Atomic HistorianPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

Paul laid on the beach thinking to himself, “They say the perfect beach experience doesn’t exist. But it does. Lounging here, the sun warming my body. The waves bringing in the cool ocean breeze, as it blows the hair on my back from side to side with each roll of the tide. The closest I’ve come to liking a warm clime. Perhaps this was the best time. A turning point. One can only hope.” Turning back over to read his book, he continued to enjoy the first bit of joy he’d had in months.

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Atomic Historian

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  • Jason Ray Morton 3 years ago

    A great story. Good job.

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Fabulous!!! Loved it!!!💖💖💕

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Such a wonderful feeling - finally being able to (and allowing yourself to) relax :) Nicely done!

  • Lovely relaxing words

  • Grz Colm3 years ago

    Sounds like the best spot if there’s books there! 😁

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Super superb!!!💖💖💕

  • It doesn't need to be an island paradise, just a beach on a beautiful day with a good book in hand. (And plenty of sunscreen. I burn easily, quickly & deeply. It's not a pretty sight.)

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