There was one rule: never peer into the well after sundown.
The well sat just past the end of our family’s overgrown garden, ancient and heavy with moss, its stones cool and damp even on the hottest days. They called it The Whispering Well, though no one seemed to know who had given it that name. I only knew my parents’ rule—strict and absolute—that I must never approach it at night.
Of course, it’s in human nature to wonder about the forbidden. I used to stare out at the well from my bedroom window, night after night, almost feeling it beckoning me with an air of knowing. And then, one stifling evening, when my curiosity clawed at me beyond reason, I ventured out under the cover of darkness, stepping barefoot onto the cold earth.
A strange quiet blanketed the garden, the air thick with a tension I couldn’t quite place. With a glance back at the house to make sure no one had seen me, I moved closer to the well, the stone steps leading down to it slick with dew. My heart thudded as I peered over the edge into the shadowed abyss, expecting nothing but still water at the bottom.
Instead, I heard something: the faintest murmur, as if voices rose from deep within. The sound prickled over my skin, tugging at something inside me, drawing me in. I leaned closer, holding my breath, and the whispers grew louder, urgent—words half-formed, yet somehow familiar. My own name echoed from below, laced with an odd, eerie cadence.
And then, as I strained to listen, the whispers grew sharper, more distinct. I heard fragments of my own thoughts, my secrets—the ones I’d never told anyone. They reverberated from the darkness, mingled with low chuckles, voices murmuring in strange languages. I tried to pull away, but it was as if the whispers held me there, rooted, pressing my secrets back to me, their voices hissing in my ears, chilling my bones.
“Who are you?” I whispered back, unable to contain my fear.
For a heartbeat, silence. Then, one voice responded, cold and brittle. “We are those who listen.”
I stumbled back, but the well’s pull was relentless. It seemed to deepen, the air twisting with something invisible but potent, wrapping around my limbs. My secrets grew louder, mocking me. With a lurch, I staggered to my feet, breaking free, my heart racing as I dashed back to the house, slamming the door behind me.
Yet that night, as I lay trembling in bed, the whispers continued, faint but insistent, as if the well’s voices had lodged themselves deep in my mind. They murmured through the walls, whispering of things I hadn’t known I’d hidden, things I’d only dreamed. I covered my ears, but the voices only grew louder, more accusing, digging up memories I’d buried long ago.
Days turned to weeks, and still, the whispers lingered, invading my every thought. I tried to ignore them, to drown them out, but each night they returned, speaking truths I wished to forget, until I could barely recognize my own voice from theirs.
They say if you listen long enough, you become a whisper yourself, bound to the well for eternity, your secrets never truly safe.
So tell me… do you think you could resist the call?
About the Creator
Pride Bohjam
I enjoy crafting dark, twisted tales that explore the supernatural and psychological. I hope my stories offer the eerie, unpredictable thrills you're looking for. Thank you for taking the time to give them a read!


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