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The Unseen Watcher

When Quiet Lives are Shattered by Fear

By Gaurav GuptaPublished about a year ago 5 min read
The Unseen Watcher
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Madison Brooks had always loved her quiet life in the small town of Hawthorn Ridge. Nestled in the heart of New England, the town was a picturesque escape from the chaotic bustle of big cities. It was a place where everyone knew each other, and the air was thick with the scent of pine trees and freshly baked bread from the local bakery. Life was simple, predictable, and safe.

But all that changed one crisp autumn evening.

Madison was returning home after a late shift at the local diner. The walk back to her cottage was one she had made countless times, a short journey through the woods that bordered the town. The path, though dark and often eerie, was something she had never feared. It was her sanctuary, a peaceful transition from the diner's bright lights and clattering dishes to the warmth of her home.

As she walked, the wind rustled the leaves, and the full moon cast long, twisted shadows across the ground. Madison pulled her jacket tighter around her, feeling a sudden chill that had nothing to do with the temperature. She quickened her pace, telling herself it was just the wind, just the natural sounds of the forest.

But the feeling of being watched persisted.

She paused for a moment, turning slowly to look behind her. The path was empty, the trees standing silent and still. A sense of unease crept over her, but she shook it off and continued on, her footsteps echoing in the quiet night.

When Madison finally reached her cottage, she felt a wave of relief wash over her. The cozy, one-story house was her haven. She locked the door behind her, turning on every light as she moved through the rooms. It was silly, she thought, to let a dark walk home unsettle her like this.

After making herself a cup of tea, she settled on the couch, flipping through a magazine in an attempt to distract herself. But her mind kept drifting back to the woods, to that strange sensation of being watched.

The phone rang, startling her out of her thoughts. She reached for it, expecting to hear her best friend Lily's voice on the other end. They always checked in with each other at night.

But the voice she heard was not Lily's.

"Madison," the voice whispered, low and gravelly.

She froze, her heart pounding in her chest. "Who is this?"

The voice chuckled softly. "You shouldn't walk alone at night."

Madison's blood ran cold. "Who the hell is this?" she demanded, trying to keep the fear from her voice.

Silence. The line went dead.

Shaken, Madison hung up the phone, her hands trembling. It was probably just a prank, she told herself. Some local kids trying to scare her. But deep down, she knew it wasn't.

The next few days passed in a blur of anxiety. Madison couldn't shake the feeling of being watched, even during the day. She noticed strange things around her cottage: footprints in the dirt outside her window, a broken branch near the path she took to the diner, and once, the feeling of eyes on her as she stood at her kitchen sink.

She called the police, but they found nothing unusual. No signs of forced entry, no evidence of a stalker. They assured her it was probably just her imagination, but Madison knew better. Someone was out there, watching her, waiting.

A week later, Madison decided to visit Lily, who lived on the other side of town. She needed to get away from the cottage, from the oppressive sense of dread that hung over her. As she drove through the winding roads, she kept glancing in the rearview mirror, half-expecting to see someone following her.

When she arrived at Lily's house, she was greeted with a warm hug and a glass of wine. The two women sat on the porch, watching the sun set over the hills, the sky painted in hues of orange and pink.

"Madison, you're really tense," Lily said, concern etched on her face. "Are you sure you're okay?"

Madison hesitated, then told her everything. The phone call, the feeling of being watched, the strange things around her cottage. Lily listened intently, her expression growing more serious with each passing word.

"You should stay here tonight," Lily said firmly. "I'll drive you home in the morning."

Relieved, Madison agreed. She spent the night in the guest room, but sleep eluded her. Every creak, every rustle outside the window sent her heart racing. By morning, she was exhausted, but thankful to be alive.

Lily drove Madison home the next day. As they approached the cottage, Madison noticed something that made her heart skip a beat. The front door was slightly ajar.

"Stay in the car," Lily instructed, her voice tense. She grabbed a flashlight from the glove compartment and cautiously approached the door.

Madison watched, her breath caught in her throat, as Lily slowly pushed the door open. After what felt like an eternity, Lily stepped back outside, her face pale.

"Madison, you need to see this."

Trembling, Madison got out of the car and walked to the door. Inside, the cottage was in disarray. Furniture was overturned, picture frames shattered, and papers were strewn across the floor.

But the most chilling sight was in the living room. Written on the wall in what appeared to be red paint were the words: "I'M ALWAYS WATCHING."

Madison's knees buckled, and she would have collapsed if Lily hadn't caught her. "We need to call the police," Lily said, her voice shaky.

The police arrived within minutes, but once again, they found no clues, no fingerprints, no sign of forced entry. Whoever had done this was careful, meticulous.

As the sun set that evening, Madison knew she couldn't stay at the cottage any longer. She packed a bag and moved in with Lily, leaving her once beloved home behind. But even with the distance, the fear followed her. She changed her phone number, installed security cameras at Lily's house, and refused to be alone.

Days turned into weeks, and slowly, life began to return to some semblance of normalcy. The calls stopped, and the feeling of being watched faded. But Madison was forever changed, her sense of safety shattered.

Then, one evening, just as Madison was beginning to believe the nightmare was over, the phone rang.

She hesitated, staring at it as it rang again and again. Finally, she picked it up, her heart pounding.

"Madison," the voice on the other end whispered. It was the same gravelly voice, the same chilling tone.

Madison's breath caught in her throat.

"I told you," the voice continued, "I'm always watching."

The line went dead.

This time, Madison didn't call the police. She knew it was futile. Instead, she hung up the phone, her hands shaking, and turned to the window. Outside, the night was dark, the moon hidden behind thick clouds.

But somewhere out there, in the darkness, she knew he was watching.

And she knew this was far from over.

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About the Creator

Gaurav Gupta

Passionate about crafting fiction thrillers that keep readers hooked until the very last page. I love weaving intricate plots, creating complex characters, and building suspenseful worlds that take you on a rollercoaster of emotions.

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