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The Surface Beneath

Where Grief Whispers and Darkness Lurks

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished about a year ago 5 min read
The Surface Beneath
Photo by Piotr Gaertig on Unsplash

In the cursed town of Fairhaven, the fog was a living entity, thick and suffocating, swallowing the light and leaving behind a creeping dread. Lila Hart, a psychologist with a shattered past, arrived at an ancient Victorian house that had been converted into an office. Its windows were like hollow eyes, watching her every move, and its creaking floors whispered secrets of sorrow and madness.

Lila had escaped to Fairhaven to flee the haunting memories of her husband, Mark, whose tragic death had shattered her world. But the town had a malevolent history, and the walls of her new sanctuary seemed to pulse with the dark energy of lost souls.

Her first patient, Oliver, was a troubled sixteen-year-old with wild, haunted eyes. He had been referred to her after a series of terrifying events—a string of objects disappearing, shadows slithering along walls, and whispers that clawed at his sanity in the dead of night.

“They call me,” he said, trembling in her office. “They want me to come to the cliffs.”

“What do you hear, Oliver?” Lila asked, her heart pounding.

“They tell me I’m not safe. They tell me to jump.”

With each session, Lila felt herself slipping deeper into Oliver's spiraling descent into madness. He began to share unsettling visions of a figure, a shadowy man who appeared in his dreams—an apparition that beckoned him into the darkness, promising liberation from pain.

One night, as Lila prepared to sleep, she heard a faint whispering. “Lila…” The voice was low, almost mocking. “Come join us.”

Startled, she flicked on the light, scanning the room for the source. Nothing. But the air felt charged, heavy with unseen eyes. In her reflection, the mirror hung on the wall, warped and twisted. She saw not just her own face, but a gnarled version, contorted in agony. She recoiled, heart racing.

Days turned into weeks, and Oliver’s condition deteriorated. His whispers turned to screams, echoing through the walls of her office. “They’re coming for me! They want my soul!” His eyes glazed over, as if something sinister lurked behind them.

Desperate to help him, Lila decided to confront the darkness together. They agreed to visit the cliffs where the whispers originated, where the sea roared like a beast ready to swallow them whole.

As they approached the rocky edge, the fog thickened, swirling around them like a living nightmare. The sound of crashing waves roared in their ears, drowning out all rational thought. Oliver stood at the precipice, eyes wide with terror and fascination. “I can feel them,” he gasped. “They want me to jump!”

“Don’t listen!” Lila screamed, fear coursing through her. “They’re lying!”

But the shadows seemed to thicken around them, curling up from the ground, whispering their malevolent promises. “Come closer, child. Join us in eternal rest.”

In a fit of panic, Oliver lunged toward the cliff’s edge. “I can’t fight it! It’s too strong!”

Lila lunged forward, grabbing his arm just as he teetered on the brink. “No! Fight it!”

In that moment, she glimpsed something that shattered her resolve—an apparition, a twisted version of her husband, Mark, standing among the rocks, his eyes hollow and his mouth twisted into a sinister smile. “You belong with me, Lila. Let him go.”

“No!” Lila screamed, her voice tearing through the fog. “You’re not him!”

The shadows surged, dragging at Oliver with icy fingers, their whispers rising to a deafening crescendo. “Give in! You’re one of us now!”

Lila felt the ground shift beneath her feet as the abyss beckoned. The fog swirled around them, thickening into a vortex of despair and darkness. Memories of loss flooded her mind, memories of Mark that were once comforting but now felt like chains binding her to this nightmare.

“Lila…” the shadow of her husband cooed, reaching out to her with skeletal fingers. “Join us. Embrace the darkness.”

Trembling, Lila clutched Oliver’s arm, desperation surging through her. “I won’t let you take him!” She pushed against the shadows, feeling their icy tendrils wrapping around her legs.

In a moment of sheer terror, Lila dug deep within herself and screamed, “You have no power over us!”

The air crackled with energy, and the shadows recoiled, but they were relentless. The whispers turned to wails, a cacophony of lost souls crying out for salvation. “Join us! You’re already lost!”

As the fog writhed around them, Lila felt Oliver slip from her grasp. The shadows pulled him toward the edge, and in that moment, she saw her own reflection in the mirror of despair—the fractured image of a woman consumed by grief, her eyes hollow and empty.

“Help me!” Oliver’s voice echoed, desperation mingling with terror. “Please, Lila!”

With an anguished cry, she launched herself forward, gripping Oliver’s arm with a ferocity born of fear and love. “You will not take him! I will not let you win!”

The darkness around them shrieked in fury, the shadows howling like a tempest. Lila focused all her strength, envisioning the light of hope that had flickered in her heart, the love she had for Mark and for Oliver. “You are not alone!” she cried, channeling her will into a blinding light that erupted from within.

The shadows screamed, writhing in agony as they recoiled from the light.

“No! You can’t escape!”

With one final surge of determination, Lila yanked Oliver back from the brink, pulling him into the warmth of her embrace. The fog began to lift, the whispers fading into a distant wail.

But the victory came at a price. The shadows, once fierce, now lay defeated, but the cost of their battle was heavy. As dawn broke, the first rays of sunlight pierced the fog, illuminating the cliffs with an eerie glow.

Lila turned to Oliver, breathing heavily, heart pounding. But he stared blankly at the sea, lost in a trance. “Where… where are they?” he whispered, a flicker of fear crossing his face.

“They’re gone,” Lila replied, but doubt gnawed at her heart. She felt the lingering chill of the shadows, like a cold hand on her shoulder. “We defeated them.”

But deep within her, she knew the truth—the shadows would return. They always returned. And the whispers would haunt her dreams, taunting her with the love she had lost and the darkness she had barely escaped.

That night, as Lila lay in bed, she felt the weight of the shadows creeping back into her mind. The mirror in her room reflected her fears, and she saw the twisted face of Mark, grinning at her from the depths of the glass.

“You can’t escape me, Lila,” he whispered, his voice a chilling caress. “You’re part of the darkness now.”

Terror gripped her as the fog rolled in, wrapping around the house like a predator stalking its prey. And as she closed her eyes, the whispers returned, promising her peace in the depths of despair, beckoning her to join them in eternal night.

Psychological

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Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    A long time ago there was a thriller movie called 'The Fog'. Your story reminded me of that movie. Bet you read a lot of Stephen King too. Great work.

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