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The Starry-Eyed Boy

Starlit Odyssey

By NikkiPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
The Starry-Eyed Boy
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The young boy yearned for a world of light in a world of darkness. Looking for a way out of the darkness, he followed the stars' course. On the peak of a mountain, he discovered a door made entirely of crystal. He pushed it aside and stepped into a brilliantly glistening new world. A girl he met there revealed the universe to him. And as they twirled through the night sky, he realized he had finally found the hope he had been seeking.

AdventureFantasyLoveShort StoryYoung Adult

About the Creator

Nikki

Welcome—enjoy the sights and sounds! Nikki here, an avid reader, writer, and lover of all things creative and historical.I love discovering new worlds and characters through books, whether they're classics, bestsellers, or indie gems.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • L.C. Schäfer3 years ago

    Oh this is lovely, thank you for sharing 😁 The thing about Vocal is, I find myself saying "ok but is he dead" a lot more often than I do anywhere else 😁

  • Grz Colm3 years ago

    I love doors made out of crystal!!! ✨😂 This is going to be an interesting challenge, yet I have no idea where to start. Thanks so much for sharing yours.

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Oh, yes!!! Love this💕💖💖

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