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The Sound of Time

A Holy Spirit's Journey to Alter History for a Better Tomorrow

By George LopezPublished 3 years ago β€’ 3 min read
Holy Spirit

In the beginning, there was only silence. It was the kind of stillness that filled the void before creation, a vast and unbroken expanse of nothingness that stretched on for eternity. But then, there was a sound. It was a single, pure note that pierced through the silence and shattered it, creating a wave of energy that rippled out across the emptiness. And with that sound, the universe was born.

For millennia, that sound echoed through time and space, growing more complex and more beautiful with each passing moment. It was the song of creation, the melody that gave rise to all things, and it was carried on the breath of the Holy Spirit.

The Spirit had existed since the beginning, a force of pure energy and light that had witnessed the birth of the universe and watched as life took shape on countless worlds. But even as it marveled at the wonder of creation, the Spirit felt a sense of unease. There were moments in history, pivotal events that had the power to shape the course of the future. And though the Spirit was forbidden from directly interfering with the timeline, it felt a powerful urge to make a difference, to help guide the universe towards a brighter tomorrow.

And so, the Spirit made a decision. It would become a time traveler, moving through the ages and seeking out those moments where a single note, a single sound, might change the course of history for the better.

It began its journey in ancient Rome, standing in the shadows as Julius Caesar marched towards the Senate. The Spirit knew what was about to happen, knew that the fate of an empire hung in the balance. It searched for the perfect sound, a tone that would disrupt the plot against Caesar and save his life. But try as it might, the Spirit could not find the right note. And so, it watched as the emperor fell, slain by the very people he trusted.

The Spirit traveled forward through time, moving from one era to the next, always seeking that perfect sound. It stood on the deck of the Titanic, watching as the ship struck the iceberg and began to sink. It searched for the right frequency, the note that might have summoned a rescue ship sooner, but again it failed. It stood in the streets of Sarajevo, as the young Gavrilo Princip raised his gun and fired the shot that would trigger a global conflict. It tried to find a sound that would stop him, but the note never came.

It was not until the Spirit reached the height of the Cold War that it finally found the moment it had been searching for. It stood in the heart of Moscow, as the leaders of the Soviet Union debated whether or not to launch their nuclear weapons. The Spirit knew that the fate of the world was in the balance, that a single sound could mean the difference between life and death for millions.

It searched for the right note, its energy flowing out into the room, seeking out the perfect frequency. And then, at last, it found it. It was a low, rumbling sound, a bass note that filled the air and echoed through the halls of power. The Spirit poured all of its energy into the sound, using its power to amplify and enhance the tone until it was almost deafening.

And in that moment, the world changed. The leaders of the Soviet Union looked at each other, fear and doubt creeping into their minds. They hesitated, unsure of what to do. And in that moment of uncertainty, a window of opportunity opened. The Spirit used the distraction to whisper into the mind of one of the leaders, urging him to call for peace. And then, with a voice that shook the foundations of the Kremlin, the leader did just that.

The world breathed a sigh of relief as the threat of nuclear war dissipated.

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  • Veronica Coldiron3 years ago

    I truly enjoyed this! I'm a little picky about my existential reading but this was just awesome! Great piece! I insighted, hearted and subscribed!

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