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The Shadow of the Unknown Traveler

The shadow of the unknown traveler

By MD. RAFIQUL ISLAM MURAD Published about a year ago 3 min read
Unknown Traveler

As Maya strolled along the meandering path that led to her town, the sun was sinking behind the hills. The crisp evening air was accompanied by the far-off noises of birds making their way back to their nests. It was a journey she had gone numerous times, but tonight, something felt different.

The trees swayed more menacingly, the silence felt heavier, and the shadows seemed to reach farther.

Maya picked up her speed, holding her shawl close to her shoulders as the first signs of dusk appeared. She saw a weird figure ahead of her, a lone traveler moving at a steady speed, as she continued to walk.

Though his shape was hazy and more like to a shadow than a man, he moved deliberately.

"Who could that be?"

Maya asked out loud. It was unusual for outsiders to pass through at this hour, and no one from her community traveled this late. Her gaze fixated on the figure, she moved forward, cautiously curious at the same time.

He had a strange, awkward gait, more like he floated than walked. Still, he stood out like a sooty figure in the waning light.

Something gnawed at her as she got closer—a unsettling sensation that this traveler didn't belong here, in this reality.

"Hello?"

she exclaimed, a little hesitant in her voice. The figure remained silent. Rather, he appeared to accelerate, his ethereal figure merging with the encroaching obscurity.

Despite her racing heart, Maya continued to walk, desperate to catch up. Maybe he's lost, she thought to herself, trying to reassure herself that there was nothing to be afraid of.

However, the figure continued to move forward, always just out of grasp, with every stride.

Suddenly, the walkway took a sudden turn, and the figure vanished from sight. Maya paused, perplexed. She said, "Where could he have gone?"

There was nowhere to hide along the straight path. A faint echo of footfall was carried by the wind whispering through the woods, giving her a shiver down her spine.

Maya hesitated for a second before turning the corner, gasping for air. The traveler was facing her now, standing motionless just ahead. The shadows covered his face, but she could still feel his icy, penetrating eyes on her.

The world seemed to be getting darker, the sky a deep purple, and her heart was pounding in her chest.

"Who are you?"

With a hushed tone, Maya enquired. The person was motionless and silent, his presence oppressive.

Thick and heavy was the strong sensation of dread that pervaded the air. Maya took a step back, her legs feeling like lead despite her instincts telling her to run.

Abruptly, the figure lifted a hand and gestured for her to come closer, moving slowly and deliberately. Despite her deep desire to go, Maya felt an unseen power draw her closer, and her pulse sped.

Like a gloomy mist, the traveler's shadow appeared to spread and grasp toward her.

Her voice faltered as she exclaimed, "Leave me alone!" However, there was no way out. The wanderer drew closer, his figure now almost wholly a shadow, his features obscure. It seemed as though he was something... unearthly, rather than a human at all.

A bell from the far-off village rang, its chime loud and clear, breaking the calm just as the darkness was about to engulf her completely. The traveler stopped, and in the dusk his shadow trembled.

He turned and gave Maya one more look before vanishing into the darkness, blending into the woods like wind-blown smoke.

As the last of the light disappeared from the sky, Maya stood there gasping for air and her heart pounding. The stillness of the air was followed by an overwhelming silence.

At that moment, she realized that the traveler had not been a man but rather a specter of a vanished past, a piece of history meandering across alternate realities.

She ran back to the village, clutching her shawl tightly with quivering hands. The bell continued to ring, its chime a comforting reminder that she was still in the world of the living.

Even though she was safe inside her house, she couldn't get rid of the unsettling impression that the shadow of the unidentified traveler was still out there, waiting, observing, somewhere deep in the night.

Perhaps there won't be a bell to save her the next time.

AdventureHorrorLovePsychological

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