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The Robber

a vision i had involving a robbery gone wrong

By the good witch Published 3 years ago 4 min read
The Robber
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this story bears absolutely no resemblance to any real life scenario. Should this story come even close to any real life scenario it is purely coincidental and not intended.

Viewer discretion is advised due to the following extreme content.

D,S,L,V, Drugs. Sex. Language. Violence.

I was returning to my apartment after walking my dog. I was talking to the front desk guy and I just said good night and turned around and began to walk away when suddenly a robber walks in with a gun and demanded that everyone get on the floor. I let my dog off the leash and told him to go behind the desk and sit. To which he obeyed.

I got the attention of the would be robber he was focused on me little did I know that my dog was stealthily circling the desk to sneak up behind the robber. All of a sudden in the middle of the conversation I was having with the robber my dog snuck up behind him and bit him while the robber was wrestling my dog I rushed the robber when he shot me. The bullet made its way into my chest directly across from the heart.

I screamed “YOU BASTARD YOU SHOT ME” as I grabbed his gun and shot him in the leg. As soon as he hit the floor I grabbed the gun. Whispered in his ear you shouldn’t have fucked with me. Then I put the gun to his ear and shot him in the head because I’ll be dammed if I’m going out alone. Especially without taking out the person who is responsible with me. I simply wont stand for it.

After killing the robber at point blank range I then took the gun put it on the counter and told the desk clerk to not shoot me that im the good guy. After laying the gun down in the counter I went to the mini hallway between the restrooms and layed down on the floor to die. Then all of a sudden I looked up and the paramedics were walking through the door and came directly over to me. They were telling me everything is gonna be alright.

While this was going on a cop came over and told me that I saved many lives that night and that I am a hero. To which I replied “I sure as hell don’t feel like one”. The cop reassured me that I would get the top of the line medical care for my heroic deeds. I was loaded on to the ambulance where I fell asleep.

I awaken In a hospital on the way to surgery to repair the bullet hole. And sew up my wounds. As I awaken the nurses start to panic and inform me that im in a hospital I reach for my phone to call the only person alive that cares about my existence my mom. I call her and put it on speaker phone and as soon as the doctor heard it ringing he snatched my phone read the caller ID mom and began to talk to her. I reached for my phone as I was being rolled into surgery because I wanted to talk to my family and let them all know that I was alive even for just another 5 minutes.

I began to get mad as the bed came to a standstill demanding the return of my phone. The nurse replied that the doctor was talking to my mother. I them began to make the closest thing to a scream that I could as I felt the anesthesia kick in I repeated the phrase i'm going down. As I fell to the bed and returned to sleep. I awaken feeling all messed up due to the drugs the hospital gave me. They were so strong I couldn’t even remember my name.

The room was empty. I began to put my finger and my thumb to loop like a circle and began meditating and chanting the following. I will heal at record speeds I wont be here for more than a week. I must have repeated that a thousand times not knowing why I was doing it. I suddenly overhear a nurse saying they cracked my chest open and cleared my arteries while they were at it because it needed to be done anyway.

So I fell back asleep for almost 24 hours when I hear my mom and 2 sisters come in. I tell them exactly what happened how and why and they said they were there for me and I am a hero. We all had a big meeting with the doctors and it looked as if I was gonna be alright.

Well folks that's where I end the story this story was based of a vision that I had yesterday some of my visions can be a little nerve racking and can be a little interesting but most times are intense. so I thought I would share this vision.

FantasyHorrorShort StoryYoung AdultAdventure

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