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The Righter

The Birth of a Legend?

By Dana CrandellPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - August 2024
The Righter
Photo by Sander Sammy on Unsplash

Mike was still too flabbergasted to think straight. He led a boring, nondescript life, worked a boring job as a convenience store clerk, and had no significant impact on the world around him. Why would he, of all people be given this opportunity? And why had they all just shown up at the store?

“I know, you're wondering why we chose you,” said the man in the green spandex suit, “but trust me, we went through a very careful selection process.” The crowd of colorful superheros behind “The Granter” nodded enthusiastically.

“You have incredible moral character. You always try to do the right thing. You encourage others to do the same. You even chose the right power when we gave you the opportunity to have any that you wished. So, we're granting it – that's MY power, and all you have to do is shake my hand.”

“Mike Reeves, The Writer, huh?”

Mike's expectation...

Mike shook the meaty, green-gloved hand and felt slight a tingle pass through his body.

“Yes, sir, and now it's done! Of course, you have to come up with your own suit and logo and such, but you've got the power of righting. When you see wrongdoing, all you need to do is lay your hand on the “perp” and he or she will instantly stop what they're doing and make amends.”

“Uh, wait...”

The Granter wasn't going to be distracted from his monologue. “No, don't thank us. It's our pleasure to give you what you've asked for and an honor to have you join us in our mutual quest to make Baltimore a safer place. See you out there!”

“But...”

It was too late. The Granter spun on his heel and in a flash, he and the other superheros were gone.

AdventureFantasyHumorSatireMicrofiction

About the Creator

Dana Crandell

Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.

Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist and Tech/Internet nerd.

My first published poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity

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  1. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

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  • Testabout a year ago

    Great piece!

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Back to say Congratulations

  • Testabout a year ago

    Yay Danna!! Congrats on #3 most discussed story!! 🎊

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Congratulations on winning third place for the "Most Discussed Stories" with this piece on this week's leaderboard. Well done! It's a brilliant bit of fiction.

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    🤣🤣🤣🤣 Poor misunderstood Mike. I loved this, so clever.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Very clever, Dana! This was a great read and an excellent origin story entry! Poor Mike!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fun and entertaining!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Sean A.about a year ago

    Hilarious! Congratulations on TS

  • Congratulations on your Top Story Dana!

  • Kendall Defoe about a year ago

    Okay, that was a cool Top Story start to a story! 🏅

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    LOL, This is so good, Dana! What a great superpower! Thoroughly enjoyed this :)

  • Testabout a year ago

    There it is in writing... hahaha! Pun intended!! Honestly, love the misunderstanding and humour in this story! Great work Dana and congrats on Top Story!!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Bahahaha!!! Well, I mean I guess it's a good superpower and all, lol. Maybe you can 'right' bad 'writing'! Great one, big bro :) Congrats on TS!

  • Matthew J. Frommabout a year ago

    back to say congrats on getting back to the top!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    So glad to see this made Top Story, Congratulations Dana

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Hilarious 😂 love it 😍

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Not surprised to see this here ol' fella! Congrats on Top Story.

  • Hahahahahahhahaha this was hilarious! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Hilarious. What a responsibility!

  • JBazabout a year ago

    This is such a funny play on words....I like that the super hero needed to finish his monologue.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Haha. Oops..

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    Hahaha...I want/need to see the suit

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Oh I get it 😂 ashamed to say it took me a minute 😂

  • Matthew J. Frommabout a year ago

    this gave me a good LOL good work Dana

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