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The Rich rude guy and the poor maid

Out of negative attitude comes love

By Jariatu KallonPublished about a year ago 21 min read

young Master please don't take that juice I saw her added something inside
your drink Oba frowned confused by what Omas said he didn't want to trust her
because of the hatred he felt for her but something made him puse he decided
to follow omas's advice babe please sip from my glass
[Music] in the peaceful city of Oka there lived
a man known as ug he was a man of great wealth and high standing in the community tall and Noble
his presence commanded respect wherever he went his skin was smooth and well
cared for he often wore elegant tral attire with richly embroidered abada and
a red cap symbolizing his chiey title he carried a walking stick adored with gold
despite his alence was known for his humility and generosity he was always the first to
contribute to community projects and his philanthropic efforts had transformed
many lives his compound in the heart of Oka was an expansive estate filled with
Lush Gardens modern amenities and a constant B of activity ugab was also a
successful businessman known for his sharp mind and a Strategic
investment had a beautiful wife who had suddenly passed away a few years after
giving birth to their only child obina obina had grown up to be a handsome
young man his father loved and cherished him so much despite his Wayward life OB
never joked with his studies he Ed associating himself with poor people and
always liked to impress classy girls ug had a housekeeper a driver and a Gates
man to manage his household in the social Gatherings Chief
uga's voice was calm and measured reflecting his wisdom and experience his
laughter was hearty often filling the room and putting everyone at ease he
treated everyone with respect from the elders to the youngest children making
him Bel loved by all one Sunday afternoon called for his son OB come
here my son he said with a gentle but FM Voice obina who was Ling in the garden
rolled his eyes but walked over to his father Yes Papa he answered trying to
sound polite my son go began I have noticed that you
have not been showing respect to the people around you this is not how I raised you you must learn to be kind and
respectful to everyone go aside but Papa they are just
servants why should I care Go's face grows
stain everyone deserves respect no matter who you are our wealth doesn't
make us better than others it gives us the responsibility to be even more
humble and kind OB look down shuffling his feet Yes Papa I will try bu placed a
hand on his son's shoulder I know you will my son I believe in you just then
their housekeeper Monica came out with a tray of freshly baked chin Chim chief
ugz I made some snacks for you and OB she said with a warm smile thank you Monica
goza replied taking a piece and offering it to obina this look delicious OB HED
but then took a piece as well thank you Madame Monica he mumbled Madame Monica
beamed you are welcome young Master later that evening go and OB sat in the
living room watching a documentary about famous philanthropist KU hope that seeing this
good deeds of others would Inspire his son OB now go said see how these people
use their wealth to help others this is what I want for you to grow up and be a
good man who makes a difference in the world open another's lonely deep into
thought I understand Papa I want to make you proud PAB smiled hugged his son you
already do my boy just remember kindness and respect are the most important
things as the night grew darker the city of Oka remained peaceful with the sound
of crooked filling the air KU looked out of the window feeling hopeful for the
future he believed that OB would learn and grow becoming a man of
honor and kindness just like him a few months later UB informed his
driver okao about an upcoming business trip okao we will be traveling for 3
weeks go said seated comfortably in his study okafo looked worried and then went
on his knees please Chief go can you can you give me a day to sort out something
important he pleaded my daughter Omas just came back from school and our
landlord gave us urgent notice to vacate I need to find a place for her to stay
while we are gone go thought for a moment tellas to come and stay here
until we return I have empty rooms in the house aaa's face light up with
relief thank you chief thank you so much he was overwhelmed by ug's kindness
later that night OB came home very late as he opened the door he saw his father
sitting in the living room watching the news good evening Papa OB greeted where
are you coming from at this time of the night UB asked his voice F I was out
with my friends OB replied casually those friends are not good company OB
you should not be associating yourself with people who don't teach you anything good go said his brow fooled with
concern we just went out to enjoy ourselves Papa OB said a hint of Defense
in his tomb go listen I will be traveling tomorrow
for a business and will be gone for 3 weeks I want you to take good care of
the house and be nice to the people around you okay Papa OB said trying to sound
sincere and one more thing go added aa's daughter will be staying here
until we return OB frowned immediately Papa I don't want to share my space with
that poor girl Go's expression hardened if you can't share my house with people
then you should get your own house that way no one would disturb you OB was
taken AB back by his father's 10 respond without another word go stood up and
walked into his bedroom leaving obina alone in the living room obina slumped
onto the couch staling at the floor he couldn't believe his father would invite
someone like Omas to come in their home he knew his father was a kind-hearted
man but this felt like too much the next morning as the S Rose over Oka goo was
busy preparing for his trip he called Oka for to his study and handed him a
Lista for make sure everything on this list is packed and ready for our trip
yes Chief Oka for replied taking the list and hurrying off to gather the
items he was responsible for packing Go's bag and the importance document
ensuring nothing was left behind in the afternoon omley arrived she was a very
smart and pretty young lady who believed strongly in truth and hard work she
carried a small bag and looked around nervously welcome Omas said Monica the
housekeeper who had been instructed to take care of her this will be your home
for the next few weeks feel free to walk around the house thank you Ma Omas Le
said softly her voice full of gratitude Monica smiled come let me show you your
room as they walk through the house Omas marveled at the beautiful decorations
and spacious rooms Monica led her to a cousin guest room with a large bed and a
window that overlooked the garden this is your room Omas Monica said if you
need anything just ask Omas no dead thank you Ma meanwhile OB was in his
room still foing about the situation he heard Monica showing Omas around and
felt a sge of anger why does she have to stay here he mattered to himself as
evening fell go prepared to leave he found obina in the living room and
placed a hand on his shoulder take care my son I trust you to look after
everything while I'm gone yes papa obina replied trying to hide his
frustration and remember go added be kind to Omas she is our guest with that
go Anda for for their trip living obas Monica and the Gat man in the house
OB still felt burdened by omas's presence Opa glanc at Omas who was
sitting quietly in the corner of the living room he sighed knowing he had no
choice but to tolerate her presence for the next 3 weeks OB would have to
navigate sharing his home with Omar and perhaps along the way he would learn a
thing or two about kindness and respect the next day OB started
commanding Omas around sending her on unnecessary errands he used abusive
words on her daily calling her a wretched thing he lived his normal life
going out with friends and coming back any time he wished since his father wasn't home to question him sometimes he
hosted his friends at his father's house and they did all sorts of rubbish there
Monica the housekeeper couldn't caution him in the absence of his father due to
the kind of person obina was he brought different classic girls home and
commanded omly to serve them obina didn't check on his father's business to
see how well the stuff were doing at his father's company one afternoon as Oba
drove into the compound he called out you poor thing come here open that boot
and carry the bag to my room when Omas opened it boot she saw a big trolley bag
she tried to carry it but couldn't because it was too heavy for her I can't
carry this you are a man you should carry it yourself after all it is your
cloth that is inside she told obina obina snailed at her do as I say om or
you will be sorry just then Monica the housekeeper saw what was going on
between the two of them and decided to come and carry the bag to ob's room let
me help with that she said softly taking the heavy bag from Omas thank you Auntie
Monica Omas whispered grateful for her help the following day OB asked Omar to
go and buy a pack of bottled water he only drank a specific brand and wouldn't
take any order Omas went to the store looking for that particular bottled
water she finally bought the pack of water and started walking back home as
she was Shing back she saw obina drive past her he didn't stop to carry her
home when omley finally got home she went and complained to Monica Auntie
Monica obina drove past me and didn't even stop to help me with this heavy
pack of water she said her voice filled with frustration Monica side and parted
omas's shoulder I am sorry about that Omas but you know he is our young master
so there is nothing we can do about it obina continued to live his Carefree
life ignoring his responsibilities and treating herle poly
every day he would call her name and make her do things that were too hard for her sometimes Omas would cry
but Monica was always there to comfort her one evening obina came home with a
group of friends Omas come here he shouted from the living room Omas
quickly ran to him yes young master serve us drinks and make sure they are
cold obina ordered omly nodded and went to the kitchen to get the drinks she
felt sad and tired but she knew she had to do what OB
asked as she served the drinks one of ob's friends laughed and said OB why do
you keep this poor girl around she looks like she's about to cry OB smacked she
is just a servant she's here to do what I say
felt a tear roll down her cheek but she quickly wiped it away she didn't want to
show them how much their wet hurt her later that night Omas sat in her small
room thinking about her life she missed her father's presence and wish she could
leave this place and find somewhere she could be treated kindly but for now she
had to stay and do her best the next morning OB was in a particularly bad mood
om where is my breakfast he yelled Omas quickly brought his food to the dining
table here it is Young Master OB took one look at it and pushed the plate away
this is rubbish I don't want this make me something else but this is what you
usually eat Omas said quietly I don't here make me something else now obina
shouted Omas went back to the kitchen her hands shaking she quickly made
another dish and brought it out to obina he tested it and finally nodded this is
better Monica watched all of this from the corner of the room she felt sorry
for Omas but knew there was little she could do OB was the young master and
they had to follow his orders that afternoon as omley was cleaning the
living room obina came in with another girl Omar clean this place up quickly I
have a guest he commanded Omas nodded and walked as fast as she could the girl
sat on the couch looking around the room you have a nice house she said to obina
thanks obina replied glancing at Omas hurry up wretched girl
Omas finished cleaning and left the room she sat in the kitchen feeling exhausted
she knew she had to keep going but every day was struggle as the days went by omley tried
to stay strong she did her best to do what OB asked even though he was always
mean to her she found comfort in talking to Monica who always had a kind word for
her one day while Omas was walking back from the store with another heavy load
she saw Oba drive past her again this time she didn't let it bother her she
knew she was strong and could handle it she was determined to survive and make a
better life for herself and her father one day two weeks later hina's phone
rang he glanced at the scream and saw it was his
father he quickly picked up the call hello Papa OB greeted warmly hello my
son gu replied how are you doing and how is
Omas is she getting used to everything around the house yes papa OB be answered
she's managing well how is business over there the business is doing well go said
but I call to inform you about a change of plans we will be coming back in 2
weeks time instead of next week okay papa no problem just take good care of
yourself OB said you too my son replied before hanging up OB as smil as he put
put down his phone enjoyment continues he whispered to himself later that day
op brought another girl home he offered her a seat in the living room and called
out to Omas Omar come and serve us OB
ordered Omas came out of the kitchen with two glasses of juice and served
obina and his guest then she returned to the kitchen but she felt on easy she
didn't trust the girl obina had brought home and decided to keep eye on her babe
I need to get my second phone from inside I will be right back OB said
leaving the living room as soon as obina left the girl quickly brought out a
small substance and added it to oba's glass of juice Omas who was pecking through the kitchen
door saw everything her eyes widened in fear people are
really wicked Omas thought to herself just then OB rushed back into the living
room and took his glass of juice omly shouted in fear young
Master please don't take that juice I saw her added something inside your
drink Oba frowned confused by what Omas said he didn't want to trust her because
of the hatred he felt for her but something made him puse he decided to
follow omas's advice babe please sip from my glass OB said to the girl I will
drink yours instead the girl looked surprised I have mine already drink
yours while I drink mine don't tell me that you are believing what this useless girl is saying I didn't add anything to
your drink believe me OB ion grew he was now sure that Omas was trying to help
him suddenly the girl's phone rang she answered it quickly and then stood up I
have an emergency to attend to she said hurriedly before running out of the
house OB turned tole did you see what she didas noded yes I saw her put something
in your drink OB aside in relief thank you Omas you saved my life Omas smiled
shyly I'm just glad you are okay OB felt a Pang of guilt for the way he had
treated Omas he walked over to her and placed a hand on her shoulder I promise
to treat you better from now on you have my word Omas noed feeling hopeful thank
you OB from that day on OB treat treed omly with more kindness and respect
grateful for the second chance she had given him the next day OB dressed in a
smart suit omley saw him and asked where are you going I'm going to the office
obina replied I want to see how my father's company has been doing since he
left on his way back from the office OB stopped by the moall he bought a
beautiful gift for Omar to thank her for saving his life he also got a gift for
Madame Monica the housekeeper to show his gratitude for her kindness from that
day on OB and Omas became the best of friends obina changed completely from
his bad ways and became a better man he started going to work regularly to
monitor what was happening in his father's company one evening he brought home some documents and
noticed that something was wrong he took it upon himself to find out who was
behind the problem he called Omas who was sitting on the couch and said please
come and take a look at these documents omley walked over and look at the papers
after a while she said these figures are not accurate it means some people are
taking the company's money and sending it to somewhere else we must find out
who is behind this as time went on obina and Omas became very close OB couldn't
stay without Omas by his side he often bought gifts for Omas to show his
appreciation Madame Monica noticed what was going between the two and was
grateful to God for bringing Omar into their lives one day Monica called omley
to the kitchen what is going on between you and the young Master she asked with
a smile omley replied nothing is going on between us since the incident with
the girl who wanted to poison him he promised to be nice to me Monica
chuckled I know the whole story but that's not the point the young Master is
in love with you love omly exclaimed
Madame Monica you are joking please I was busy when you called me she then
left the kitchen that night as Omas lay on her bed she couldn't stop thinking
about what Monica had said she wondered how could a man who once called
me all sort of abusive names fall in love with me the next day OB andle
continued working on the company's documents they discovered more signs of Fraud and we are determined to find out
who was responsible obina was grateful to have omas's help and often thanked
her for her support one evening as they were walking OB said Thank You Omas I
couldn't have done this without you Omas smiled and replied you are welcome OB
I am happy to help Monica watched them from the kitchen smiling to herself she
knew that their friendship was growing stronger each day and believed that they were meant for each other as the day
went by ubina and Omas worked hard to uncover the truth about the company's
finances they spent many hours together discussing their findings and planning
their next steps OB appreciated Omas Le's intelligence and dedication and he
found himself caring for her more and more one afternoon as they took a break
from their walk OB said to Omas I want to thank you again for everything you
have done you are not just a friend to me you are like a family Omas was
touched by his words thank you obina that means a lot to me Monica who was
passing by couldn't help but smile she hoped that one day Omas and OB will
realize their true feelings for each other that night Omas lay in her bed
thinking about ob's we she wondered if it is possible that he could really love
her maybe Madame Monica was right she thought but how can I be sure as the day
years passed OB andas Bond grew even stronger they continued to work together
uncovering more clues about the company's finances and getting closer to
finding the corporate obina felt happier than he had in a long time he knew that Omas was the
reason for his new found joy Omas too felt a deep sense of gratitude and
affection for OB she realized realized that he had changed for better and that
their friendship was something special despite her doubt she began to wonder if
there was more to their relationship than just friendship two days later OB now andle
were able to find out who was behind the company's missing money they were both very happy with their hard work we did
it Omas OB said with a big smile yes we did Omas replied I knew we could figure
it out together the next day go returned home with Oka everyone was so happy that
Chief ug was finally back OB hugged his father tightly welcome back Papa he said
omley also embraced his father welcome Papa welcome Chief she said and everyone
greeted them warmly that night as they all sat together OB asked his
father how was your journey Papa it was good my son gu replied how have you been
and how is everyone in the house I'm good Papa as you can see OB said he then
told his father everything that had happened including howle had saved his
life Papa if it wasn't for om I don't know what would have happened ug looked
at Omas with gratitude thank God for using Omas to save my one and only child
he said the next day Chief ug decided to
give a small apartment toas and her father as a token for gratitude Omas you
and your father have done so much for my family he said I want to give you this
apartment I said Thank youas went on her knees to thank Chief
ug thank you chief for your kindness toward my father and I she said tears of
joy in her eyes everything you need is already in the apartment go said you
only need to bring your clothes and move in that evening Omas and her father
moved into their new home when they arrived they couldn't believe their eyes
the apartment was very beautiful and had everything they could ever want omas's
father hugged her tightly you are a blessed child he said OB also told his
father how Omas had helped him trace the people who were stealing the company's
money I couldn't have done it without her noticed the great change in his
son's life OB now I see that you have become a better man he said I am very
proud of you ug felt that he had achieved everything he had ever wanted
in life he was happy to have his family together and to see his son doing well
as they settled into their new home Omar and her father felt a deep sense of
gratitude they knew that their life had changed for better thank you Papa said
to her father I am so happy to be here with you and I'm happy to be here with
you my daughter her father replied we are truly blessed from that day
onas and OB continued to work together helping each other and growing closer
their bond became even stronger and they knew they could always count on each
other as the days turned into weeks and we turned into months OB began to feel
bored and uncomfortable around the house he missed Omas since she was no longer
living with them anymore he spent more of his time inside his room feeling
lonely his father ug noticed his son's change in Behavior one evening ug
knocked on oba's door may I come in my son he asked yes Papa OB replied sitting
up on his bed go entered the room and sat beside
obina what is the matter with you obina you haven't been yourself lately he said
OB Side I don't know why I'm feeling this way Papa ever since Omas moved to
her new home I feel so lonely I miss her ug smiled warmly my son you are in love
he said if there is anything you need me to do for you you can always count on me
he ped obina on the shoulder and then left the room obina thought about his
father's words he knew he had to talk to Omas about his feelings the next day he
decided to reach out to her he went to her new home and knocked on the door
Omas opened the door and was surprised to see obina obina what a surprise
please come in she said they sat down in the living room Al OB took a deep
breath I need to talk to you about something very important he began sure
OB what is itle asked looking curious I have been feeling lonely and
unhappy since you moved out obina said I have realized that is because I have
feelings for you I love you om I can't imagine my life without you I wish we
could build a family together Omas was taken a back by his confession
OB I don't know what to say she looked into his eyes and saw the sincerity in
his weight I know this is sudden and I understand if you need time to think
about it obina continued but I had to tell you how I feel omas's heart was
filled with warmth she had always admired ob's kindness and the changes he
had made in his life she realized that she had feelings for him too
OB I love you too she said softly ob's face light up with joy really you do he
asked hardly believing his ears yes I do Omas replied with a smile I have always
cared for you and seeing you become a better person made me love you even more
OB took her hands on his Omar will you be with me will you marry
me and build a family together he said tears of joy filled Omas Le's eyes yes
obina I will she said nodding they embraced each other tightly feeling a
sense of completeness obina couldn't wait to share the good news with his father they
went back to ob's house hand in hand when they arrived go was sitting in the
living room he looked up and saw the joy in their faces what is it my children he
asked Papa omley and I have something to tell you OB said
excitingly we have decided to be together Omas had agreed to marry me
Go's eyes sparkled with happiness this is wonderful news he exclaimed I am so
happy for both of you he hugged both of them warmly the news of obina and Omas
Le's engagement spread quickly and everyone was thrilled they began to plan
their wedding and the preparation brought even more joy to their lives on
the day of their wedding friends and family gathered to celebrate their love
as obina andle stood before their loved ones exchanging vows they knew they were
ready to start a new chapter in their lives together they promised to love and support each other forever their love
story became and inspiration to many showing that true love can grow even
from the most unexpected places OB and Omas lived happily ever after building a
beautiful family and cherishing every moment
together the lesson from this story is that true love and genuine change can
come from the most unexpected places sometimes difficult situation and
challenges bring out the best in people leading to personal growth and the
discovery of deep connections this story teaches us the importance of kindness
gratitude and recognizing the value of those who support us it also shows that
with honesty and courage we can express our true feelings and build meaningful
loving relationships thank you for watching this amazing
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  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

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