The Reversal
The river ran backward on the day the Queen vanished.

The river ran backward on the day the Queen vanished. Its dark, viscous flow defied nature, retreating upstream with a violence that echoed the tumult brewing in the hearts of the kingdom’s denizens. What had once been a lifeline to the realm had morphed into a sinister current, swirling in hues of deep crimson, as if imbued with the very essence of despair.
In the castle, the atmosphere hung heavy, pregnant with foreboding. The Queen had ruled with an iron fist cloaked in velvet; her subjects adored her, yet they feared her, for they could sense the darkness that nestled behind her piercing gaze. Rumors of a pact with forces unseen had persisted for generations, whispers that wrapped around the castle like vines, choking the very spirit of the land.
On that fateful night, the palace staff, caught in the grip of a restless slumber, heard the sounds of muffled screams. The air was thick with dread, and as dawn broke, they ventured into the Queen's chambers, hearts pounding in unison with the echoes of their fears.
The scene that met them was a tableau of chaos—a shattered crown glimmered on the floor, the jewels smeared with dark ichor, and the once-opulent bed lay in disarray, its silks torn as if a great struggle had occurred. Long scratches marred the stone beneath the window, each claw mark a chilling reminder that something otherworldly had breached the sanctity of the castle.
Princess Elyse, the Queen’s daughter, awakened in a haze, her mind fogged by dreams that twisted reality into something grotesque. She had witnessed shadows creeping toward her mother’s chamber in the depths of the night, felt the chill of something sinister wrapping around her heart. The world outside felt altered, stripped of its vibrancy, as if the very essence of life had been siphoned away.
In her fevered state, she stumbled to the riverbank, the sight before her seizing her breath. The water thrashed violently, shapes beneath the surface writhing in a frenzied dance, their faces twisted in silent screams. She gasped, the chill of the air biting at her skin, and in that moment, she felt an unexplainable compulsion—a voice resonating within her, beckoning her to join the lost souls.
“Mother…” she murmured, though she had yet to comprehend the depth of her yearning. “What have you done?”
Elyse’s nights became haunted, plagued by visions of her mother’s pale figure wandering the castle halls, her face twisted into an expression of torment. The shadows grew long and dark, curling around her like tendrils of smoke, and in her dreams, she could hear the whispers of the river—soft, seductive, and filled with a promise of solace.
The palace walls echoed with the restlessness of the townsfolk, gripped by unease. Every child felt the weight of their mother’s despair; every father carried the burden of whispered rumors. The air thickened with dread, and the landscape mirrored the turmoil brewing in their hearts.
As the days dragged on, reports surfaced of villagers drawn to the river at twilight, their faces pale, eyes clouded. They stood on the banks, entranced, as if the river sang to them, its voice a haunting melody that danced through the cool night air. Those who dared to approach were never seen again, absorbed by the inky depths that beckoned them.
Desperation seeped into Elyse's bones. She sought counsel with Father Guiseppie, the castle’s priest, whose words bore the weight of ancient knowledge. He listened intently as she spoke of her mother, of the dark energy that now enveloped the castle, and the insidious allure of the river.
Father Guiseppie’s brow furrowed, and he whispered of an ancient curse—one that thrived on despair and consumed those who dared approach its source. “The river is alive, my child,” he said, his voice quivering. “It craves the essence of the living, feeding off the darkness within their hearts.”
Determined to confront the malevolent force that had claimed her mother, Elyse ventured to the river once more. The sun dipped below the horizon, casting a pallid light over the water. Shadows flickered across the surface, teasing her with glimpses of her mother’s face, sorrowful and haunting.
With each step toward the edge, the whispers grew louder, wrapping around her mind like a vice.
“Come, dear Elyse,” they urged, voices dripping with sweet malice. “Join us in eternal peace.”
She stood at the riverbank, her heart racing, and in that moment, she felt the pull of something ancient and powerful. It offered the promise of understanding, of clarity that transcended the mundane world. “Mother, I’m here!” she cried, tears streaming down her cheeks.
The river surged, water rising in a violent swell, reaching for her like a lover’s embrace. The surface roiled, and for an instant, she glimpsed her mother’s face—pale, ethereal, and filled with an indescribable sadness.
“Elyse,” it called, “join me. We can be together again. You can understand.”
Elyse hesitated, torn between love and fear, between the desire to save her mother and the dread of what lay beneath the surface. But the darkness was relentless; it clawed at her mind, whispering secrets of power and control, promising to unlock the depths of her heart if she surrendered.
The ground beneath her trembled, and the river’s roar became deafening. The shadows around her danced with a life of their own, creeping closer, entwining around her legs, urging her to step forward, to embrace the depths.
“Mother!” Elyse screamed, the sound swallowed by the tumult of the river. “I will save you!”
In a moment of clarity, she turned, sprinting back from the edge, but the shadows lunged, ensnaring her with icy fingers. Elyse’s breath hitched as they pulled her toward the water, her screams mingling with the whispers of the river, each word an echo of despair.
And then, just as her feet slipped from the edge, she heard it—a voice, fierce and unwavering, cutting through the cacophony. “You cannot have her!” Father Guiseppie’s figure emerged from the shadows, arms raised, a crucifix gleaming in his hands.
With a fervent prayer, he advanced toward the river, confronting the darkness with the light of his faith. The waters churned violently, and for a fleeting moment, the shadows recoiled, howling in agony as the priest’s voice rose above the din.
But it was not enough. The river surged back, retaliating against the light, and in a moment of horrifying clarity, Elyse realized that the darkness had taken root within her. The whispers echoed in her mind, merging with her own thoughts until she could no longer tell where she ended and the river began.
With one last desperate effort, she reached for Father Guiseppie, her fingers brushing against his, but the shadows enveloped him, pulling him into the depths as his screams were swallowed by the water’s roar. The river surged forward, dragging Elyse down into its murky embrace.
The last thing she felt was the cold grip of the river around her, the darkness enfolding her like a shroud. And then, silence.
In the kingdom above, the river flowed steadily once more, its surface reflecting the serene blue of the sky. The townsfolk dared not approach, for they could feel the malevolence lurking beneath the surface. Whispers persisted of the Queen and her daughter, their souls forever intertwined with the river, calling to those who strayed too close.
On stormy nights, when the winds howled and the rain lashed against the earth, villagers would sometimes hear laughter mingling with the thunder, a haunting sound that echoed through the darkness.
And if you stood by the riverbank in the stillness of night, you might catch a glimpse of shadowy figures dancing just beneath the surface, their faces twisted in a ghastly waltz—a reminder of the darkness that lay within us all, and the price we pay for seeking power and love in the shadows.
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I am probably wrong but is there an essence of demon possession in this story. Some of the scenes to me read that way. Great work.