The Price of Staying
When kindness becomes an economy of its own.

Uncle Saeed was an aging man whose eyebrows had grown thick with time, softening the quiet brightness that still lived in his eyes. He supported three daughters and a son, each studying in a different field, each carrying a portion of his hope for a better future. Every morning, he rose before dawn to the sound of the neighborhood farmer calling out his prayer. Saeed whispered a few words of his own into the waking air, asking for strength to carry his family through another day.
Before waking his children, he lit a small pile of firewood coated with the dust of years. He prepared milk tea and shaped small pieces of dough with hands that trembled more with each passing winter. The biscuits were simple, uneven, and warm, but they carried a tenderness that no bakery could replicate. The children gathered around the old wooden table, drinking their tea and eating their father’s handmade biscuits, never thinking to ask how he managed to sustain them with such consistency.
After sending them off with warm embraces, Saeed stepped outside, leaning slightly on a wooden stick worn smooth from years of use. He walked three kilometers to the local market, his breath tightening with each incline, his feet moving with practiced determination.
In the market, merchants greeted him as soon as he appeared.
Welcome, Uncle Saeed.
Here comes the heart of the market.
He answered with a gentle smile, revealing bright teeth that seemed untouched by age. The greeting was not for the goods he sold but for the warmth he carried wherever he went.
Saeed’s shop smelled of old books and forgotten decades. He sold antique household pieces passed down through generations: rusted clocks from distant eras, hand-carved picture frames, silver and copper cups darkened by time, and other relics that invited people to imagine the lives they once belonged to.
With a voice softened by age, he called out to customers:
Come closer. Today I have a piece more than a hundred years old.
People gathered around him as they always did, drawn by curiosity and by the sincerity in his tone.
But one habit puzzled those who paid attention. Every time Saeed sold an item, he slipped behind a wooden partition at the back of his shop. He stayed there for a moment, then returned to the customer as if nothing had happened. The behavior became a quiet mystery in the market, whispered about but never questioned directly. The secret settled into the rhythm of the place like a shadow no one dared disturb.
One morning, Saeed’s children woke to an unfamiliar silence. The house held no scent of warm biscuits. There was no sound of firewood crackling or tea simmering. One of them said softly:
Maybe he is tired today. Let him rest.
But in the market, worry spread quickly.
Where is Uncle Saeed
He never misses a day
Maybe he is sick
Finally, one merchant gathered a few others and they walked to Saeed’s home. With every step, their fear grew heavier. They knocked, called his name, waited. The silence behind the door was too thick.
They broke the old wooden door that, like the items he sold, carried a history of its own.
Inside, they found him lying peacefully on his bed. His face was calm, his lips curved into the same gentle smile that had brightened the market for decades. But this time, the smile no longer belonged to the world of the living.
Saeed had left quietly, just as he had lived.
His children cried over him, calling out to him, begging for one more morning, one more embrace. Their voices filled the small home, echoing through the rooms he had kept alive with his labor and love.
But grief does not return what it takes.
A few days after his passing, something unexpected happened.
Poor families began arriving at the market. Women, men, and children. Some walked slowly, some hurried, all of them carrying the same question.
Where is the man who visits us every Monday and Thursday
He brings us help without giving his name
He did not come this week
When the merchants told them Saeed had died, grief swept across the market in a way no one anticipated. People cried openly. Prayers rose into the air, mingling with the scent of old wood and dust.
One customer stepped forward. He had always suspected something unusual in Saeed’s routine.
I noticed your father going behind that wooden wall each time he sold something. I never knew why. Maybe you should see it.
The children and the merchants went together to the small shop.
Behind the wooden partition, they found a beautifully carved box, its surface etched with delicate patterns. On its lid was a simple phrase:
The Price of Staying
They opened it.
Inside were neatly organized lists of families in need. Next to each name was an amount of money Saeed had set aside for them. Every sale he made contributed to those envelopes. Every Monday and Thursday, he carried them across the city, placing them quietly at the doors of those who needed help most.
His children stared in disbelief.
The merchants stood silent.
And the poor families cried again, but this time their tears carried gratitude more than sorrow.
In that moment, they understood the truth Saeed had guarded all his life.
The strongest economic systems are not built in banks.
They live quietly in the hearts of those who give without being seen.
About the Creator
Alhussain
Sudanese writer and emerging social researcher exploring culture, identity, and the lived experiences of everyday people. I blend storytelling with academic insight to make sense of the world around us.



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