The Note Heard Around the World
Friday 22nd November, Story #327/366
Saturday 13th July 1985, 6:40p.m.
The man bounced on the balls of his feet, like his Adidas sneakers were made of springs. The ripple of nerves in his belly was like the famous butterfly: a little flutter that built to a raging storm of raw energy, building in his blood and bones. He channelled it with years of practise, and the talent of a showman. His moustache bristled with it. It'd shortly meet with the tsunami of emotion brewing out there. One perfect storm in the making.
A palpable buzz leapt from person to person. Like a flea, or a virus. Every upturned face reflected it. An intoxicating cocktail of optimism, oxytocin, and anticipation thrummed in the air.
70,000 people! Even more watching live on their televisions...
Did he even know, in those moments, that this performance would be iconic, etched in history?
It was a far cry from where they'd started. Pretty far, even, from just a few years before. All those flamboyant costumes. All that hair.
Tonight was about crowd-pleasing hits standing on their own merit. Not technical on-stage shenanigans, lighting, or outlandish clothes. For this, he'd chosen faded wranglers, white vest, and a studded band taut against his right bicep. Simple. Direct. No frills. Just music.
They headed onto the stage and took their places. His at at the piano, fingers set to the keys. The opening chords were instantly recognisable. The roar out there swelled, and the emotion with it. An entity: living, breathing, pulsing, swaying. The beat.
He held it, and its symbiotic partner (the crowd) in the palm of his hand. When he left the keys to strut forward, arm aloft, they were entirely captured, mesmerised.
The last notes of the song faded, and he called out to them, buoyed up on their response. Like a spell that reverberated back, a wave that kept building each time it sloshed across the stadium. The notes belted out, reverberated around the world and down the decades.
Hit after hit, with every last body clapping, stamping, and singing for twenty solid show-stealing minutes.
The span of his life was only 5 September 1946 until 24 November 1991, but his voice will live forever.
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Word count: 366
(NB. This excludes the title, subtitle, and author's note.)
Submitted on Friday 22nd November at 22:22
The story behind the story: I hope it's obvious who and what this is. If not, if I've failed, then have a video of it. I'm a couple of days early.
A Year of Stories: I'm writing (and submitting, here) a story every day this year. This continues my 327 (!!!) daily micro-fiction story streak since 1st January.
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Comments (13)
Until the outfit detail I was convinced he was an athlete! And then the reveal unfurled and delivered so much satisfaction
Loved this piece! My ringtone is "Bohemian Rapsody"....but my absolute favorite is probably "Who Wants to Live Forever" or the soundtrack from the Highlander movie.
I guessed! One of my favourites, an incredible voice.
Good job! How do you think writing a story every day has affected your writing overall so far? Would you say that it has improved? Have you experienced any negative consequences? Sorry, my curiosity knows no bounds!
One of my faves, LC.Especially We Will Rock You.
Yea I had no idea who this was about, lol. But it's not because you failed but because of my ignorance 😅😅
Ooooo! I wondered, love who you drew inspiration from for this!! I see you're in the count down for how many days left this year... will you be doing this again next year??
It started coming together after the mention of what he was wearing. And when he sat down at the piano, I thought of Bohemian Rhapsody, the Movie. Which gets 5, well-deserved stars in my book. Very compelling story in 366 words. And I loved this bit: A palpable buzz leapt from person to person. Like a flea, or a virus. 🤩
Excellent work. I knew who this was by the title.
And what an incredible 20 minutes it was!
What a great tribute to one of the best, there will not be another. I like how you kept the identity hidden, because so many faces flashed in my mind, included Freddy. I was happy it was him.
Great writing, L.C.
I was thinking Freddy Mercury when you talked about the bristling mustache! It's not often I'm right, so it must be down to your fab writing. Loved this. He was such a legend.