The Man with the Umbrella
A Story Every Day in 2024 March 18th 78/366
"Look over there! In that field! There's a man with an umbrella! Where's he going?"
Michelle was always curious about what others were doing and he did look mysterious, shrouded as he was in the mist, with a furtive, purposeful length to his stride.
"He's probably just getting some exercise," I replied, hoping to deflect what I knew was coming next.
"But what if he's not? What if he's a spy or a murderer or something? Let's follow him!"
"Those seem like very good reasons to stay right here," I said, as a wise 18 year old but Michelle ran through my words to pursue the retreating figure, already being absorbed by the fog.
We'd lost Michelle once before, in Paris, and for me, they were the most frightening minutes of my life. She had wandered off in the Louvre and whilst she had only been missing for no longer than two minutes, it was enough time for my imagination to do some macabre conjuring. She was 9 then; she was now 13 and just as impulsive and unaware of danger.
I hightailed it after her into the fog, making sure that my eyes were on her at all times.
When I caught up with her, she was crouched behind a bush. She heard me approach and put her fingers to her lips to quieten me. Despite myself, I was rather curious.
"He's in there!" she said. She was trembling with nervous anticipation, like a young rabbit startled on a path.
Ahead of us, the woods, and the lumpy form of a ruined cottage, overgrown with ivy.
"I think he's meeting someone!" she hissed.
Off she went, before I could stop her.
"Michelle!" I tried to whisper urgently, but the trees muffled my words.
*
She stood motionless, gaping.
He was indeed meeting someone.
Pink buttocks proudly exposed, trousers down, energetic pumping. Gasps and grunts. Pleasure.
I tried to draw Michelle's shocked form away before we were noticed.
She was quiet all the way home. I thought it was the shock but it wasn't. Not totally. It was because she knew who he was meeting and our lives changed forever more from that date.
It was Mother.
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Apologies for the rudeness of this. It was designed to shock, of course, to emulate the surprise of the characters.
A shock discovery that alters everything you've known before and at such an impressionable age.
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Comments (10)
It reminds me of the Peter Sellers movie "The World of Henry Orient" but with a stunning O'Henry style twist at the end.
I'm at the hospital right now for an appointment with the doctor and I'm so glad I'm wearing the facemask because the only thing that people can see is my widened eyes, not my jaw that dropped. Whoaaaa, that was one hell of a shock!! I really thought he was a murderer but seemed too obvious so I thought he may be up to something else. I never thought he'd be screwing someone, let alone their mom!! Like that was two back to back shocking plot twists!! So now the question is, would they tell their dad. My question to you, would ypu continue this?
Holy moly - what an ending! I thought this was a great read and then that last line. This was absolutely fantastic.
Rd - No "Rudeness" intended. But, shouldn't that be "Brolly" from your Chatsworth, u.k. part of the world. j.in Chatsworth, l.a.
Great story!
Wow! Once again down the rabbit hole with Alice. I suppose there are some secrets we’d rather not know! Really good story telling, utterly believable!
Have you seen the movies or Netflix etc lately. I am so sorry for the young un-s. They are leaving nothing to the imagination of the kids. What a horrible thing for a child to see. Well executed story...hopefully it never happens.
Well, that's different. A good turn and interesting tail...I mean "tale"! 🍑
Bloody hell. Their mother is a bad-yin! lol. Anyway...this was perfectly executed. The rudeness was actually pretty soundly balanced between being shocking enough and not just out and out erotica porn lol. Loved how you made Michelle really come to live. Feel like we learned a lot about her and how her sister was always stopping her from her curiosity leading her to danger. I wonder if Michelle will stop being so curious and nosey now? Well done, Rachel.
Mysterious, spicy, scandalous--deftly done!