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The Man Who Came at 3 A.M.

A mysterious figure appears every night—until a forgotten family promise changes everything.

By Umar AliPublished 8 months ago 3 min read

For weeks, I had been waking up at exactly 3:00 A.M., every single night.

I didn’t set an alarm. I wasn’t drinking caffeine. But something inside me stirred at that precise hour—an unsettling chill, a sense of being watched.

At first, I brushed it off as a coincidence. A bad dream. A restless mind. But one night, when I woke up and looked out the window, I saw him.

He was standing across the street, beneath the flickering streetlamp. Dressed in a white shalwar kameez, a cap on his head, and a wooden cane in one hand. He wasn’t moving. Just staring directly at me.

My heart froze.

He didn’t blink. He didn’t wave. He just stood there, as though time itself had stopped around him.

I leapt from the bed, turned on the lights, and looked again.

Gone.

The Next Night

I told myself I imagined it. I told myself I was tired. But deep down, I knew better.

The next night, I woke up at 3 A.M. again. My pulse quickened as I crept toward the window.

There he was. Same clothes. Same posture. Same silent stare.

This time, I took out my phone to snap a photo—but my camera showed nothing. Just darkness.

Panicked, I ran outside. The street was empty. Still and quiet.

The Letter

The third night, I woke up early—2:55 A.M.—determined to catch him. I waited by the window, eyes wide open.

At 3:00, he appeared.

But this time, something was different. He wasn’t looking at me anymore. Instead, he bent down and placed something on the ground in front of my gate. Then vanished into the shadows.

I ran downstairs and found a folded piece of paper.

It was a letter. Yellowed with age. The handwriting was shaky but strong. It read:

"You made a promise, my son. A promise not kept holds the soul from peace."

I stared at the note, confused. What promise?

The Forgotten Past

I showed the letter to my grandmother the next morning. Her face turned pale.

"This... this looks like your grandfather's brother's writing," she whispered.

"He went missing in the 1971 war. Never came back. Your father promised to fulfill his dream if he had a son."

I was stunned. "What was the dream?"

She smiled sadly. "He wanted to open a school for poor children in his village. But your father died young. Maybe... maybe the promise passed on to you."

My full name is Abdul Majid—named after that very man.

The Mission

I couldn’t explain why, but something inside me awoke. A sense of duty. A connection.

Within weeks, I found the village he once lived in. The place was crumbling. Poor kids roamed the streets with no education, no hope.

I used every rupee I had saved. I reached out for donations. I contacted NGOs.

It took three months, but I opened a small learning center—"Majid Academy"—in his name.

The day it opened, I stayed up again until 3:00 A.M., heart pounding.

And when I looked out the window... he was there.

But this time, he was smiling.

Then, like mist, he disappeared.

The Final Dream

The next night, I had a dream.

He came to me, standing in a field of light.

"You remembered," he said gently.

"You gave them what I couldn’t. You freed me."

I woke up in tears.

He never came again.

The Truth Behind Shadows

Sometimes, the ghosts that haunt us aren’t here to scare us.

They are the echoes of forgotten promises. Of lives interrupted. Of legacies left incomplete.

At 3:00 A.M., I no longer feel afraid.

I feel purpose.

Mystery

About the Creator

Umar Ali

i'm a passionate storyteller who loves writing about everday life, human emotions,and creative ideas. i believe stories can inspire, and connect us all.

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  • alan stiles8 months ago

    That's a creepy story. Waking up to that guy every night would freak me out. Wonder what the promise was about.

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