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The Last Mayflower

Microfiction On Guilt

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 8 months ago β€’ Updated 8 months ago β€’ 2 min read
Top Story - May 2025
The Last Mayflower
Photo by Mangesh Dave on Unsplash

This is for Mikeydred's May Challenge.

Guilt is a flower that never stops blooming. Michelle Liew

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The month of May was significant for Mrs. Callum--the dutiful housewife placed a single Mayflower on her window sill every day of the month. The flower bloomed, resplendent, each year.

But Mrs Callum passed.

The flower always faced the rising sun. But it faced no one that year.

No one in her town dared touch or even pass her window. They said it was tradition they didn't dare defy...but Liddy knew it was Mrs Callum's containment. Hunger. To forget, and to be forgiven.

An envelope. Rose-coloured, with Liddy's name written in smudged ink. It was the perfect puzzle for the bored, curious grade-schooler--it bore a Mayflower and a Cipher only she could solve.

The blue ink bled, profusely, when she touched it. It was almost as if it didn't want to be read. It hadn't been mailed--it sat on the porch too neatly, as if it wanted her to discover it.

Yet, it wanted unravelling. It read: "Do not remember her."

But Liddy didn't know who she was--yet.

Tired from the day's comings and goings, Little Liddy fell fast asleep as soon as her head hit the pillow.

Her sleep was fitful...one marked by a nightmare of a cellar. A uniform. A little girl, shrieking at the top of her voice. A shovel.

And Mrs. Callum, blood-soaked, digging.

Relentlessly digging.

Liddy shot up in bed, sweat trickling down her brow. She glanced at her trembling hands--hands with dirt at the fingertips.

The young girl knew that the memory wasn't hers...yet it had become hers.

No one knew, much less recalled, Mrs Callum and her little daughter--the voiceless one. Perhaps no one wanted to know. But the Earth remembered every May.

And Liddy had become the Someone Else who had to.

Mrs Callum never wanted to--never meant to. But everyone else was so hungry.

So thin.

There were just...too many of them.

So she grew a flower each May. Then buried it. The only way she could forget.

But the bloom didn't wither. It rooted.

Within a child each year

Liddy was this year's child. She had inherited the flower and Mrs. Callum's grievous nightmare.

She grew a new Mayflower, and placed it on the sill, her eyes eerily vacant.

Concerned, her mother asked her if anything was the matter.

She knew Mrs Callum's daughter's name now. May.

Forgetfulness had a price. And Liddy was paying...for Mrs. Callum.

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Original story by Michelle Liew. AI tags are coincidental.

Copyright Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin 2025

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Mike Singleton πŸ’œ Mikeydred 8 months ago

    Thank you for this

  • Marilyn Glover8 months ago

    Phenomenal writing, Michelle. I love the mystery and how you tied it all together. Congratulations on your top story!

  • Another excellent story , great analogy , though I thought it was for my monthly challenge as well πŸ˜ΈπŸ‘

  • Tim Carmichael8 months ago

    It's like guilt itself, it lingers and roots where innocence once bloomed. Congratulations on your Top Story!

  • John Coleman8 months ago

    This story is really intriguing. The idea of guilt being like a never-ending flower is a unique concept. I can't help but wonder what led Mrs. Callum to do what she did. It seems so extreme, growing a flower every May and then burying it. And that envelope with the cipher is a cool plot twist. It makes you want to know what Liddy will discover. I also felt for Liddy when she had that nightmare. It must be so confusing to have memories that don't seem to be yours. I'm curious to see how she'll deal with all of this as she tries to solve the mystery. Will she be able to uncover the truth about Mrs. Callum and what happened? And what does that cipher really mean? It's definitely got me hooked and I can't wait to find out more.

  • Mother Combs8 months ago

    Congrats on a Top Story

  • Dalma Ubitz8 months ago

    What a gorgeous piece! An incredible idea with an even better execution. I loved your writing here.

  • C. Rommial Butler8 months ago

    Well-wrought! There's something of the symbolic here, leaving us to guess at the means of ethereal transmission. The most haunting pieces often leave us guessing, and isn't that what a haunting is, a whisper in the dark that makes us imagine more than we want to know?

  • Komal8 months ago

    This was hauntingly tender! I love the way you used Mayflower as a symbol of guilt blooming eternally. Sometimes flowers don’t bloom, they remember. πŸ’–

  • Marie381Uk 8 months ago

    Very nice βœοΈβ­οΈπŸ“•

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