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The Last Hour at Saint Verena’s

You can hear the bells ringing every night at 3:17 a.m. — even though the church was demolished ten years ago.

By MUHAMMAD SAIFPublished 3 months ago 4 min read

They say Saint Verena’s bell never stopped ringing.

Even after the fire, even after the walls fell and the roof caved in, those who live near the ruins claim they still hear it — a low, mournful toll that echoes through the fog at exactly 3:17 a.m.

I used to laugh at the story.

Then I moved into the caretaker’s cottage beside it.

Saint Verena’s had been abandoned since 2015. The church sat alone on the hill like a scar — blackened stone, shattered glass, and the smell of rain-soaked ash. My job was to catalog what remained for the local historical board. I told myself it would be just a few weeks of quiet work.

The first few nights were peaceful. I spent my days photographing burnt pews, the rusted bell, and the fractured altar that had once glowed under candlelight. The silence was comforting — until it wasn’t.

On the seventh night, I woke up to the sound of metal clanging in the distance.

Three rings.

A pause.

Then one more.

I checked my phone.

3:17 a.m.

At first, I thought it was the wind moving debris — but the rhythm was too deliberate, too human.

The next morning, I climbed up the hill with my camera. The bell tower was half collapsed, and the actual bell itself was cracked clean down the center. It couldn’t have rung — not even if someone struck it.

That’s when I noticed something strange.

Near the altar, in the soot and dust, were footprints. Bare feet. Small. Leading in circles.

And at the center of those circles — a single white feather.

It was untouched by ash.

The caretaker before me — old man Harold — had died in that same cottage. The locals said he used to ring the bell every night before the fire, calling the lost back home. But when the flames started, he ran inside to save something — no one knew what. He never came back out.

They never found his body.

That night, the bell rang again.

This time, I didn’t stay inside.

The air was so cold it burned my throat. The fog clung to my skin like wet silk as I climbed the hill with a flashlight. When I reached the ruins, the sound stopped — replaced by whispers. Not voices exactly, but echoes. Words too soft to catch.

The beam of my flashlight caught movement near the bell tower — a figure, small and still, facing away from me.

A girl.

Her dress was white, frayed at the bottom, and her hair shimmered like smoke.

“Are you lost?” I asked, my voice shaking.

She turned slowly. Her eyes were grey — no pupils, no color — just mist.

“Where’s the bell?” she asked.

“It’s broken,” I whispered.

She tilted her head, listening. “No, it’s not. You just can’t hear it yet.”

The next thing I remember is waking up in the cottage, clothes damp, mud on my shoes. My camera sat beside me, turned on — though I didn’t recall taking any pictures. When I checked the gallery, there was only one photo: the bell tower glowing faintly, surrounded by floating white feathers.

I tried to delete it, but the screen froze.

Then I heard the first chime.

3:17 a.m. again.

The sound didn’t come from the hill this time.

It came from inside the house.

I followed it to the small wooden chest under the bed — one left behind by Harold. Inside, wrapped in a piece of scorched fabric, was a brass key. Attached was a tag, almost burned through, that read:

“For when the ringing stops.”

That night, the bell didn’t ring. The silence was worse. I couldn’t sleep, couldn’t think. Every creak of the house felt like someone moving closer.

When I finally looked out the window, I saw the girl again. She was standing at the hill’s edge, pointing toward the church. The fog behind her glowed faintly — as if something inside the ruins was burning again.

I grabbed the key and ran.

The key fit into the tower’s locked door — one I hadn’t been able to open before. Inside, the smell of smoke and wet stone hit me at once. My flashlight flickered, and for a split second, I saw them — shadows lining the walls, dozens of them. Kneeling. Praying.

Each turned their head toward me in perfect unison.

At the center stood the girl, holding the cracked bell rope in her hands.

“He’s waiting,” she said.

“For who?” I whispered.

“For you.”

The last entry in my field notes — the one the police later found — was timestamped 3:16 a.m. It read:

“The bell is whole again. I can hear him calling. I have to see.”

No one knows what happened after that. They found the cottage empty, the front door open, and the hill silent. But every October, locals say the ringing returns — faint, steady, and always one minute early.

And if you walk up Saint Verena’s Hill just before 3:17 a.m., you’ll see a light inside the ruins — like a lantern swaying slowly in the dark.

Some say it’s Harold.

Others say it’s me.

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