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"The Jealous House"

: A Story of Family Betrayal, Struggle, and Survival

By Sazia Afreen SumiPublished about a year ago 5 min read
"The Jealous House"
Photo by Natalya Zaritskaya on Unsplash

It was a stormy night when Meera stood on her brother’s doorstep, gripping a heavy suitcase and the weight of countless unspoken fears. At just 26, she had finally landed a job that promised stability. After years of juggling odd jobs, scraping by, and caring for her niece, Priya, she finally had a chance to build something meaningful. But there was one major hurdle: she couldn’t live alone.

The city had grown too dangerous, and her meager salary didn’t leave room for much else. So, after much hesitation, she reached out to her brother, Rohit, for help. He owned a house in a quiet suburb, and despite their rocky relationship, he agreed to take her in.

But there was a catch.

Rohit’s wife, Neelam, was far from warm and welcoming. Meera had always sensed something unsettling about her. Neelam was beautiful, manipulative, and exuded an air of superiority that grated on Meera. Yet, she had little choice. Her nephew, Rahul, was studying to become an engineer, and the only way to protect him and herself was to endure the harshness of her sister-in-law.

But there was a catch.

Rohit’s wife, Neelam, was far from warm and welcoming. Meera had always sensed something unsettling about her. Neelam was beautiful, manipulative, and exuded an air of superiority that grated on Meera. Yet, she had little choice. Her nephew, Rahul, was studying to become an engineer, and the only way to protect him and herself was to endure the harshness of her sister-in-law.

struggle Begins

Meera had hoped that once she settled in, she would find peace and focus on her work. But Neelam’s attitude made that impossible. Each day, Meera was reminded of her status in the household—not as a sister-in-law, but as a burden. Neelam would make snide remarks, often loud enough for everyone to hear, about how Meera’s presence was disrupting the 'peace' of their family.

Meera kept her mouth shut. She couldn’t afford to stir the pot. After all, she had promised herself that once she secured a steady job and saved some money, she would move out. But every time she sought a way out, Neelam’s cruelty made it increasingly difficult.

It wasn’t just Meera who felt Neelam’s wrath. Rahul, her 16-year-old nephew, was often Neelam’s favorite target. Despite his academic success and kind nature, Neelam constantly belittled him. She would frequently accuse him of being lazy or not studying hard enough. But that was just the beginning.

Neelam had a knack for getting into Rahul’s head, sowing seeds of doubt about his future.

"Rahul," Neelam would say, "Don’t pay attention to your aunt. You’ll never succeed in life, no matter how hard you try. You just don’t have what it takes."

Initially, Meera thought it was just the usual parental pressure. But as the months went by, she began to notice a shift in Rahul. His grades started to drop. He became withdrawn and quiet. The confident young boy who once aspired to be an engineer was now grappling with anxiety, uncertain of his capabilities.

Meera attempted to talk to him, offering comfort, but Neelam was always there, undermining her words. "Don’t listen to her," Neelam would scoff. "She’s just a failure, remember?"

The Breaking Point

One afternoon, when Meera returned home from work, she found Neelam lounging in the living room with a smug expression. Rahul was nowhere in sight.

"Where’s Rahul?" Meera asked, her voice laced with concern.

Neelam’s lips twisted into a sly smile. "Oh, he’s in his room," she replied nonchalantly, "studying... or at least pretending to."

Meera hurried to Rahul’s room. She knocked gently before opening the door. What she saw made her heart sink.

Rahul was sitting on his bed, staring blankly at his textbooks. His eyes were vacant, and his face looked ashen. He appeared to have not eaten in days, his hands trembling as they gripped the pen.

"Rahul," Meera whispered, kneeling beside him. "What’s wrong? Why do you look so pale? Have you been eating?"

Rahul’s eyes met hers, and for a brief moment, Meera caught a glimpse of the desperate plea within them.

"I... I can’t do this anymore, Aunt Meera. I’m not good enough. Neelam keeps saying I’m worthless. That I’ll never be anything," he said, his voice shaking.

Meera felt her heartbreak. She understood what Neelam was doing, but this was more painful than she had anticipated.

"Don’t listen to her," Meera replied gently, wrapping him in a hug. "You’re so much more than her words. You’re smart, Rahul. You can overcome this. We’ll face it together, I promise."

Yet, deep down, Meera realized she couldn’t handle it alone anymore. She needed to take action.

Aunt’s Determination

The following day, Meera resolved that she wouldn’t allow Neelam’s toxicity to ruin Rahul’s future any longer. She was determined to find a way out, not just for herself, but for Rahul as well. She searched online for options to transfer to a different job or relocate, but nothing seemed feasible.

That night, she made a pivotal decision: she would find a way to secure her own government flat. If she could manage that, she could escape this harmful environment and provide Rahul with the fresh start he deserved.

Weeks went by. Meera fought tirelessly, completing paperwork, attending interviews, and waiting for approvals. Meanwhile, Neelam persisted with her cruel tactics, attempting to turn Rahul against Meera, claiming that his aunt was only using him for her benefit.

Finally, after eight long years of struggle, Meera received the long-awaited news. She had been granted a flat. It was small, but it was hers.

The Final Betrayal

As Meera packed her belongings, preparing to embark on a new chapter of her life, thoughts of the future filled her mind. She felt fear, yes, but there was also a glimmer of hope. She could build a better life for herself and Rahul.

However, just as she was about to leave, Neelam made one last visit to Rahul’s room. Meera caught snippets of their conversation from the hallway.

"You really think your aunt is going to save you?" Neelam mocked. "She’s just going to leave you behind, Rahul. Can’t you see? She’s only using you to feel better about herself. She doesn’t care about you."

Meera felt a chill run through her. This was the final straw.

She stepped into the room, her voice steady yet assertive. "That’s enough, Neelam," she said, locking eyes with her sister-in-law. "Rahul is my responsibility, and I won’t allow you to bring him down any longer. You’ve turned his life into a nightmare, but that ends now."

Neelam appeared taken aback, but Meera’s determination was unwavering.

Turning to Rahul, Meera offered a gentle smile. "We’re going to get through this. Together."

As Meera and Rahul left that night, leaving Neelam to wallow in her jealousy and bitterness, they understood that the path ahead wouldn’t be easy. But for the first time in years, they felt liberated from the chains that had held them captive.

And as Meera stepped into her new apartment, she realized one thing for certain: this was just the beginning. The start of a life founded on love, hard work, and hope. No one—especially not Neelam—could take that away from them.

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About the Creator

Sazia Afreen Sumi

I craft stories that delve into love's many facets—romantic, unrequited, and lasting—plus other intriguing themes. Discover tales that resonate!

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Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Raushan Miraabout a year ago

    Nice.

  • Soma Ahmedabout a year ago

    Nice.

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