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The Girl Who Heard the Moon

The Moon Disappears, and Only One Girl Can Hear its Cries

By Emma AdePublished 8 months ago 4 min read
The Girl Who Heard the Moon
Photo by Guzmán Barquín on Unsplash

No one noticed when the moon began to dim.

At first, it was just a whisper of shadow, a slight dulling of the silver glow that hung in the night sky. Scientists called it atmospheric interference. News anchors shrugged and moved on. People still slept, still dreamed.

But on the seventh night, the moon vanished.

Gone—completely. No crescent. No sliver. No pale light spilling over rooftops or rippling in lakes. The night sky was a silent, star-pocked void. The world panicked.

Satellites malfunctioned. Ocean tides grew erratic. Wolves refused to howl. Still, no one could explain what had happened.

Except for Ellie—a quiet 9-year-old girl with curly hair, curious eyes, and a telescope her grandmother had given her before she passed away.

Ellie was the only person who could hear the moon cry.

It had started the same night the moon disappeared. A soft sound, like wind through chimes or the distant hum of a lullaby sung underwater. At first, Ellie thought she was dreaming. But then the sound grew louder, clearer—mournful and full of pain.

Each night, she pressed her ear to her bedroom window and listened. The moon’s cry wasn’t just sadness; it was fear.

“Why is no one helping it?” she whispered into the dark.

No one believed her. Not her mother, who blamed stress and turned up the TV. Not her teacher, who smiled awkwardly and suggested fewer comic books. Even the school counselor handed her a journal and said, “Write it all down, sweetie.”

So Ellie wrote.

She filled pages with the moon’s cries—how they wavered like song, how they felt like cold rain in her chest. She drew what the moon looked like in her mind now: trapped, hidden behind something vast and cold.

That night, the moon spoke for the first time.

“Ellie,” it whispered.

She nearly fell out of bed.

“Who are you?” she whispered back, heart pounding.

“I am Luna. I am lost. Trapped.”

“Where?”

“Beyond the dark sky. A shadow holds me. It feeds on silence. You are the only voice I can hear.”

Ellie stood up, wrapped herself in her grandmother’s old quilt, and walked to her telescope.

“I’ll help you,” she said. “I don’t know how—but I will.”

The next day, Ellie skipped school. She took the telescope, her journal, and her quilt to the hill behind the old observatory—the highest point in town. She didn’t know what she was searching for, only that the moon's cries were stronger here.

As the sun set and the stars blinked awake, Ellie heard the sobbing again—clearer now, wrapped in words.

“The Shadow King has taken me. He eats the light of old things—dreams, lullabies, memories. I am fading.”

Ellie looked to the sky. “Can I come to you?”

A long silence.

“Only the forgotten can pass through the veil. Only those the world overlooks.”

Ellie’s heart thumped. “Then I’m perfect.”

She lay on the grass, clutching her telescope. The stars wheeled above her. The night wrapped around her like the quilt. She whispered lullabies her grandmother used to sing, over and over, until the edges of the sky began to shimmer.

Then everything vanished.

Ellie awoke on a silver bridge floating in a sky of ink. Above her, stars pulsed like hearts. Below, there was nothing but endless shadow.

At the end of the bridge stood a castle of obsidian, pulsing with cold.

Inside, the moon wept.

As she stepped forward, something slithered from the dark.

The Shadow King.

He had no face, only smoke and glowing red eyes. “You don’t belong here, child.”

“You took her,” Ellie said. Her voice trembled but didn’t break.

“She is mine. Her light fed too many dreams. I grow stronger with silence.”

“You’re afraid,” Ellie said. “Afraid of children who dream.”

The Shadow King growled. “Leave, or be forgotten forever.”

Ellie gripped her telescope. She remembered the moon’s voice, the lullabies, her grandmother’s warm arms. She remembered light.

“I’m not afraid of the dark,” she said. “But you should be afraid of me.”

She raised the telescope.

Not to look—but to shine.

The lens glowed with moonlight—a reflection of everything Luna had once given: wonder, hope, the magic of night. It pierced the shadows like a sword.

The castle shook. The Shadow King screamed, shrinking into the cracks of the sky.

The moon appeared above, chained and dim—but smiling.

Ellie ran to her. “I’m here.”

“You remembered me.”

And with a single touch of Ellie’s hand, the chains shattered.

When Ellie opened her eyes, she was back on the hill. The moon hung huge and golden above her. The stars glittered like applause.

Her mother stood nearby, tears in her eyes. “The moon—it came back. People say it’s a miracle.”

Ellie just smiled.

That night, the moon didn’t cry. It sang.

One year later

Ellie’s journal was published under the title “The Moon’s Cry.” Her drawings inspired a planetarium show. No one remembered exactly why the moon had vanished, only that a little girl had believed it could be saved.

And every night, when the world slept, Ellie stood by her window, telescope in hand, and listened.

The moon didn’t cry anymore.

But it always said:

“Thank you.”

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About the Creator

Emma Ade

Emma is an accomplished freelance writer with strong passion for investigative storytelling and keen eye for details. Emma has crafted compelling narratives in diverse genres, and continue to explore new ideas to push boundaries.

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  • Michael Wilcox8 months ago

    This story's cool. Reminds me of that time I had a strange experience with a tech glitch no one could explain at first. Ellie's so brave to listen to the moon. I wish I'd had her courage when facing tech mysteries on my own.

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