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The Ghost of Spin Ghar

He returned to find his father gone, and his uncle wearing his turban.

By Mudasir Hakeemi Published 6 months ago 1 min read

The night Wali Khan returned from the city, the mountains were silent.

No gunfire. No laughter. Just wind.

His father — Haji Gul Rahman — had died in what they called a hunting accident. But something in the air, in the way the elders averted their eyes, told Wali there was more.

His uncle, Safdar, now sat on the old woven rug where his father once led prayers. He wore his father’s white turban — the same one Wali used to see on Eid, perfectly wrapped.

No one said it, but everyone knew.

At midnight, Wali climbed to the edge of the Spin Ghar ridge. The moon cast long shadows. That’s when he heard it:

“Wali…”

A voice in the wind.

“Revenge is not justice. And justice is not always revenge.”

He turned. No one. Only the echo of a man he had once called father.

Wali stayed in the village. Said nothing. Watched everything.

He noticed how Safdar spoke softly to the elders, handed out sugar to the children, donated to the madrasa — like he was erasing a crime with kindness.

But he didn’t see the boy watching from the shadows.

One night, Safdar’s son — Imran — came to Wali.

“I heard my father,” he whispered, trembling.

“He said, ‘It was the only way.’ He was talking about… your father.”

Wali felt no rage. Just ice in his chest.

“Would you testify?”

Imran shook his head. “I am his blood. But you are his son.”

Wali didn’t pick up a gun. He picked up a recording device.

At the next jirga, he played it.

The elders fell silent. Then stood.

Safdar didn’t speak. He didn’t need to.

He took off the turban. Walked away from the rug.

And Wali?

He didn’t sit in his father’s place.

He walked to the mosque and swept the floor.

Because justice wasn’t revenge.

It was memory. And silence. And truth.

Short Story

About the Creator

Mudasir Hakeemi

I am poor boy

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