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The Orchard That Grew in a Da

Grief changes us. Nature listens.

By Mudasir Hakeemi Published 6 months ago 1 min read

I. The Inheritance

Leah hadn’t been back to Hollow Root since she was eleven.

The family left after the fire—after her father’s silence grew louder than the smoke, and her mother began painting with her back turned to the world. Now, fifteen years later, all she had left was a deed, an urn, and a GPS signal that barely held a pulse.

The land was supposed to be dead. Just dirt and bones.

She drove in silence, the sky sagging with gray.

II. Something New

She reached the land at dusk.

But instead of the scorched hilltop she remembered, she saw trees.

Dozens of them. Maybe hundreds. Neat rows of fruit trees—peach, pear, apple, fig. Blossoms still clung to some branches; ripe fruit weighed down others.

It hadn’t been there. Not yesterday. Not ever.

No neighbors. No gardeners. No explanation.

Just a wooden sign staked at the center of the grove:

“Planted by Remembrance. Watered by Love. Grown in Absence.”

III. Taste of Memory

Leah wandered through the trees in a daze, fingers brushing bark, lips murmuring disbelief. The wind smelled like citrus and sugar. She picked a peach, soft and blushing, and bit into it.

The taste wasn’t peach.

It was the sound of her mother humming while folding laundry.

The warmth of being held after skinning her knee.

The way her mother said, “Come home anytime.”

She wept without sound, juice dripping down her wrist.

IV. What Grows in Grief

She stayed the night in her car. The next morning, a new row of saplings lined the southern edge of the orchard.

Leah scattered her mother’s ashes under the oldest tree and whispered thanks, unsure who she was speaking to—God, the land, or something older.

She didn’t call the news. Didn’t tell her friends. She returned every month, bringing only a journal and questions she never wrote down.Summary / Intro Paragraph:

After her mother’s funeral, Leah returns to the land her family abandoned decades ago. She expects weeds and silence. What she finds is an orchard that didn’t exist the day before—and fruit that tastes like memory.

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About the Creator

Mudasir Hakeemi

I am poor boy

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  • Hazrat Usman Usman6 months ago

    Good 👍 story keep it up bro

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