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The Endless Fall

A Journey Through the Abyss of Existence

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 2 years ago 3 min read
The Endless Fall
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An unusual situation befell a guy called Jason once at a time in a world that did not exist. It seemed like he was falling into an infinite chasm the second he was on his way home from work. He was floating on an unexplainable surface of whirling lights and whirling hues with no solid base beneath him. Despite the force of the wind, he was not accelerating his descent. He descended in an endless cycle, with no feeling of elevation, time, or location.

First, Jason freaked out. The boundless space ate up his screams as he yelled into them. In his desperate attempt to seize something, he wildly waved his arms and legs, but to no avail. His fear eventually gave way to weariness after what seemed like hours, and he let himself just collapse. His mind was racing, so he closed his eyes and focused on breathing to calm himself.

Jason started to take note of everything as he kept falling. The whirling hues around him gave him fleeting views of unfamiliar locations and images. Extraterrestrial vistas with luminous rivers and lofty mountains greeted him. Cities seemed to float in midair as he saw skyscrapers twisted and turning in ways that defied the laws of gravity. He saw others navigating these peculiar realms, some of whom were similar to him and others very different.

Is this all a dream? Or has he somehow slid into another dimension? Jason couldn't tell. Everything back home—his friends, family, and daily routines—felt so far away when he reflected on them. Though he wished he knew how, he was unable to return.

Time passed, maybe in the days or weeks. Adapting to his new world was something Jason had to work on. Not only did he not get thirsty or hungry here, but he also never got weary. He devoted his time to watching the passing pictures and attempting to decipher them. On occasion, he would see images from his own life, such as his boyhood house, his elementary school, or the park he frequented as a youngster. He felt both comfort and yearning in these fleeting glances of familiarity.

Jason once seen a person materialize in the distance as he was falling. Approaching closer, he noticed that it was indeed a lady. Her golden halo of hair cascaded down her back as she fell in step with him. She ignored Jason's calls for help, as if absorbed in her own thoughts. Surprisingly, their palms met as he extended his hand.

Her wide eyes betrayed her shocked reaction as she gazed at him. "Who are you?" she inquired, her voice resonating in the silence.

He introduced himself as Jason. "I have been captivated by... To be honest, I have no idea. Where do you stand?"

"My name is Rosie," she introduced herself. Somehow, I ended myself here. I went from being at home to this place, tumbling, in an instant.

For some time, they exchanged tales and theories on their peculiar predicament. They clung to one another for a while, but the void's currents ultimately separated them. Jason felt a glimmer of optimism after their encounter. In this peculiar location, he was not alone.

Over time, Jason came across a greater number of individuals. Some of them were only passing figures, vanishing as suddenly as they had emerged. Some people lingered with him for more time, offering him their insights and thoughts in return. They worked together to search for an exit, but the emptiness had no solutions.

Jason felt a bond with his other hikers despite the never-ending falls. In a place where they could find no support, they provided each other with company and comfort. Instead of trying to run away, they embraced their destiny and found purpose in their relationships.

Time seemed to stand still amid the emptiness, as if years or even seconds had no bearing. After seeing so much of the world and meeting so many interesting individuals, Jason developed a talent for storytelling. He discovered meaning in telling tales that uplifted and encouraged others.

Although Jason was never able to stop falling, he had overcome his feelings of being lost. Connection, understanding, and a sense of home may be found even on the most baffling and seemingly interminable trip, he had learned. So he plummeted into the boundless void, certain that he was never really alone.

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About the Creator

Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Amy littleabout a year ago

    Wonderful

  • Shelby about a year ago

    Beautiful

  • Kennedy Smith2 years ago

    Impressive work 👏

  • Murali2 years ago

    Jason accepted his surroundings, and he became a new person.

  • Samson E. Gifted2 years ago

    Great story telling sir

  • Milrose samboque2 years ago

    it was fun reading it, looking forward to read more from you

  • John Baxter2 years ago

    It was fun reading your story! Thanks for sharing

  • Gloria Penelope2 years ago

    Another mystery of loneliness here. No real connection, yet others were there. Comforting each other was the only hope. Hmmm this story left me a bit scared.

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