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The Crack in the Door

I could not move, I just stood there watching them.

By Marie381Uk Published 3 months ago 3 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Crack in the Door

It started with a crack in the door, a thin line of light cutting the hallway in two. He thought I was away for the night, out with the girls, a plan that had been set and quietly cancelled. The text had come through earlier, soft and apologetic, and I had smiled at my phone, thought nothing of it, then turned the key and stepped into a house that smelled like lemon cleaner and someone else’s perfume.

Something in the quiet felt wrong. I moved down the hall with my heels in my hand, bare feet on the cold wood, listening to a laugh that didn’t belong. It was low and rough, older than it should be for our life, and his voice answered, soft and almost tender in a way he hadn’t been to me in months. The door was open a sliver, and I stood there, breath shallow, watching.

He was half-dressed, shirt hanging loose, the way he always looked when he had been trying to pretend he wasn’t tired. Beside him, the woman was practiced, careful in a way that said this was business, not mistake. She had silver at the roots, lipstick blurred at the edges, hands that knew how to smooth a skirt and take folded notes without letting the fingers linger. When it was over, he reached for a wallet and passed her money, neat and quick, as if the paper itself could make what had been done clean. She tucked it away and left. He sat on the edge of the bed, elbows on his knees, staring at the floor. He thought I was gone. He was wrong.

I didn’t cry, I didn’t storm in or scream. Noise felt cheap and childish beside what I had seen. I stepped back into the dark and left without a word, letting the door click shut on a life I no longer recognised. Outside, the night was a clean blade, and I walked until the world blurred and my lungs felt like they belonged to someone else.

By morning he was moving through our house like a man who had practiced the shape of a life he could return to. He kissed me, talked about work, poured coffee with the same careful hands that had just ached around another woman. I watched him, every motion a ledger in my head. There is a particular clarity that comes after betrayal. It feels like cold, and in that cold, plans take shape with the calm certainty of winter.

Revenge came quietly, like a seed planted deep, not shouting or breaking, not even tears, just small, careful acts that began to undo his world the way he had undone mine. I started with his things, little details that would confuse him, a misplaced document, a deleted number, a missing watch. Then the envelope, photographs, receipts, notes, not enough for the police, just enough to make him think someone was watching. He turned pale when he saw it, his hands trembling the way mine had that first night. He looked at me then, really looked, searching for comfort he had already sold. I smiled, a small, quiet smile.

He asked me if I had seen anyone near the house. I said no. He asked if I had heard anything strange. I said no. He asked if I was all right, and I said softly, “I am now.”

I left that night, no goodbyes, no explanations. The next day I was told he lost his job, the life he thought he could keep after all his lies slipping through his fingers. Three weeks later he was gone, swallowed by his own choices, an overdose no one could untangle. My revenge was sweet. No one messes with a gangster’s daughter. I finished him. May he rot in hell.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham3 months ago

    Good job. I believe this could be a great chapter in a romance book or even a true crime novel.

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